Perspective

Drifting upon the tides of tomorrow- forgotten pressures of today

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Marty Owens

Date: 1/10/2010 7:11:00 PM

Wonderful...Love it...Marty

James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/10/2010 1:32:00 PM

like learning to ride a bicycle, nice! jimbo

P Sheart

Date: 1/10/2010 12:54:00 PM

Yes, these are powerful waves at the same time soothing and spiritual. A lovely Cinqku Brian! I so love the ocean. Take care Love Light Patty

James Fraser

Date: 1/10/2010 7:07:00 AM

True words Brian, so true >> James

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 1/10/2010 6:16:00 AM

Very lovely write and faith in tomorrow. A drifting can also be a great relief is a beautiful idea and a lovely poem. Your few words contain treasure of ideas and we all are being benefitted.Thanks a lot. I have placed a new long love story in parts 1-7 The Boatman’s Song. Some completed and some yet to come. Hope you would find it interesting. With regards and best wishes, love Ravindra

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2010 3:57:00 AM

Most of today will be no longer remembered but it is in the computer of our brain forever stored away. I like the way that you presented the idea. Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/10/2010 12:43:00 AM

You have captured the souls of many in this piece. I can feel the waves lulling me into tomorrow. A beautiful little treasure!

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/10/2010 12:40:00 AM

Look forward , it's the future ; today will be yesterday's problem , soon enough !! Yes , Brian , snow , snow and more snow , so maybe a thaw for tomorrow !! ... We just have to " grit our teeth " and get-on-with-it . Shame , the Councils would not do the same with the roads ....