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Perhaps the Heart of Day

` Twilight Twilight...the darkest part of dusk Velvet blanket pulled tight to chin of day Once bright day that’s now become a husk of its former sunny self And now shall sleep the night away Twilight's neither day or night It’s life is measured in minutes And it’s hue is always grey It’s mordant hue, It’s somber light It’s job is of transition It’s what tucks in... the drowsy day Twilight’s but a tiny part But it’s a tiny part we trust and if the day had a heart T’would be twilight The darkest time ...of dusk...

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Date: 11/15/2017 4:40:00 PM
A bit of a tongue-twister; at first attempt rather difficult to read through...so I gave it several. Each time I read it, out aloud, it just got better and better! It really is very cleverly constructed, David...most impressed -- its a little beaut!! My very best regards as always. :) john
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