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Perhaps One Day - For Avatar

   (a Triple Triolet)

Where blues and purples dominate,
Pandora beckons from beyond.
Entranced by it, I gravitate. . . 
Where blues and purples dominate,
a way of life to celebrate
and with creation, share a bond.
Where blues and purples dominate,
Pandora beckons from beyond.

There stands a tall strong mother tree,
and mountains float upon the sky.
What many wonders you can see!
There stands a tall strong mother tree
inside this forest fantasy;
take hold a huge bright beast and fly!
There stands a tall strong mother tree,
and mountains float upon the sky.

Perhaps one day we’ll understand,
as did the one named Avatar,
to live in peace, stand hand in hand.
Perhaps one day we’ll understand
to say “I see you;” love our land;
no need to leave and travel far!
Perhaps one day we’ll understand
as did the one named Avatar.

Not a strictly romantic movie, but it involves love of nature as well as a romantic part between the leads. And I LOVED this movie and its message!
For  Nicola Byrne's Movie Mania - Romance Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/8/2011 10:25:00 AM
Lovely write on a film that even I managed to stay awake in LOL
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Date: 1/12/2011 1:49:00 AM
Wonderful!I have watched Avtaar.Enjoyed-kashinath
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Date: 4/14/2010 10:53:00 PM
i saw it the week it came out.i buy boot legs from this guy, he's my man for sure.LOL.im so guilty. it was pretty interesting, the producer of the movie, i heard he had a dream of this entire idea of his. it was okay for me. the dramatic scene with whats her name, during the end was pretty good i love the meaning. "I see you" was so cute.(: -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 1/11/2010 2:26:00 PM
Andrea, i can't wait to see Avatar. I just love fantasy films. I try to put messages into my fantasy poems, you can view them all on www.thehighlanderspoems.com > u can leave a comment in the guest book, at the bottom of the home page. This is a superb poem, thank you for sharing >> James
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Date: 1/11/2010 1:10:00 PM
to continue....this goes to my favorite list. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/11/2010 1:09:00 PM
Dear Andrea, I too saw Avatar and my mind is still filled with the visions I beheld and the story and the message it so clearly and heart-wrenchingly conveyed as does the magnificent poem.
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Date: 1/11/2010 9:19:00 AM
This is another of your fabulous writes Andrea...and I have not tried a triolet yet...but perhaps I will. Wonderful use of imagery and rhyme!! Sounds like a fabulous movie too(will have to see it now)...Yes Taz and I are together and he is here at PoetrySoup. Poetry is what brought us together. Thanks so much for sharing and for your taking the time to read my writes. Also you kind comments and words of encouragement are so very deeply appreciated! Have a blessed day~Mary
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Date: 1/11/2010 8:47:00 AM
Super happy you were able to watch it! I think I even loved it the second time around, and your triple triolet definitely did justice to the movie! based on the comments you got here, you sure wrote a very convincing write! Loved how your triolet worked so well in reiterating the message of the movie, bravo! ^_^ I still owe you an email btw--sorry will try to do so by tomorrow :) for now, will be commenting on your poems first ;)
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Date: 1/10/2010 11:44:00 PM
Andrea thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/10/2010 6:40:00 PM
okay Andrea. This is just marvelous.I'm afraid it will be quite a while before I try one of these. Looks way too difficult ..and why should I.?..if you are doing them so much justice.. :)-Robert Yes --get Lilah cleaned up pretty ...the cat contest is on.."cat tails". Thanks for your comments-Robert
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Date: 1/10/2010 5:46:00 PM
Andrea, you got me all excited about seeing this movie!It sounds like it really touches upon the beauty of the earth,forest and universe. Your tribute to Avater is so beautifully written my friend. Sounds like oscar too!Take care sweet! Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/10/2010 3:12:00 AM
My grandson went to see the movie. Just the scenes on tv seemed scary to me. Glad that you enjoyed and got a good message from it. Sara
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Date: 1/10/2010 12:32:00 AM
Wow! It sounds like this movie really inspired you. This poem has such beauty, I can't wait to see the movie. You write beautifully in this form I find quite difficult. Mahalo, Connie
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Date: 1/10/2010 12:06:00 AM
I did not see the movie yet, but after reading this amazing poem, I must... and thanks so much for your comment on Cat Tails
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Date: 1/9/2010 6:04:00 PM
In answer to your Ga comment, it usually is not this cold here. We usually have 50+ degree days and occasional dropped down at night to 20's but not often. We got a dusting of snow, nothing to play in. thanks for your comments.
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Date: 1/9/2010 4:55:00 PM
Good write! - ed
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Date: 1/9/2010 4:50:00 PM
We too, just saw the movie...and the message conveyed is in your poetry, Andrea! Great work! ~ Carrie
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