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Perhaps a Past Life

I feel such an affinity for the earth For rivers, mountains and wild things At times I feel I've been here before, Before the angst the modern world brings Was I a maiden, with long black hair Who lived beside the great waters Did I follow the buffalo, the people's path Perhaps I was a warrior's daughter In my dreams I hear the beat of the drum And the smell of the campfire comes to me Yet in the light of day I pause to wonder If it was just a dream, or perhaps a memory

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/7/2014 12:37:00 PM
Beautiful flow. Many Congrats on deserving win. -Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 6/30/2014 6:11:00 AM
Congrats on a great win BG
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Date: 6/30/2014 12:16:00 AM
Interesting write, congrats on the win, Barbara
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Date: 6/29/2014 10:07:00 PM
Congrats Barbara .....Seren
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Date: 6/29/2014 8:18:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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Date: 6/29/2014 8:04:00 PM
Great poem and fine win!!
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Date: 6/29/2014 7:32:00 PM
Awesome poem, Barbara, Many congrats on your top win. bfn your friend in poetry, Elaine
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Date: 6/29/2014 7:09:00 PM
well done Barbara, this piece took us on your journey..congratulation on a well deserved win
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Date: 6/29/2014 5:08:00 PM
Barbara, this is such a beautiful write and deserving of a great win. congrats and hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/29/2014 3:38:00 PM
Barbara, you are so deserving of this wonderful win. BRAVO, my friend for this beautiful write! Please accept my heartfelt congratulations. Pandita.
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Date: 6/29/2014 3:03:00 PM
You have made me believe these feelings that come to you......I can't help but think of all the possibilities, things that we can't know in this life.....but perhaps will learn in the next. Excellent poem, Barb !
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Date: 6/24/2014 3:46:00 PM
gosh, it seems almost like you are telling how it really is for you. I would have to make it up if I decided to do this contest. I love who you chose to be. I have Cherokee blood and my mother sometimes tells me I remind her of an Indian princess. This is so nice.
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Date: 6/24/2014 9:08:00 AM
A lovely write my friend and dream or memory the words ring a bell with me! My maternal grandfather was Native American...
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Date: 6/23/2014 1:00:00 PM
- One can never know ..... Interesting to read, Barbara !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/23/2014 8:23:00 AM
a repost.. sorry everyone..some glitches we are trying to overcome.
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