Home » Poems » Brandy Nicole » Perfectly Pieced

Brandy Nicole | + Follow Poet |

Perfectly Pieced

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Brandy Nicole.

Image- imgur.com

Imperfect- Music by Kiwi

Press play to hear the music

in a fountain of wishes, where dreams are tossed like pebbles hope is rushed, silence hushed - light being the language of one seeking imperfect to be yet, perfectly pieced are we Perplexed: at how pieces perfectly connect with you when, imperfect to be are we ___________________ ~ Just a little Scribble ~ Thoughts from the Heart

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Running Wolves

Date: 1/7/2020 4:32:00 PM

Beautiful write, imperfect perfection...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/7/2020 9:38:00 PM

So sweet of you to say. Thank you. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/4/2019 1:25:00 AM

You are quite the philosopher Nicole - your poems are deep and always thought through perfectly - another beauty! Hugs, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/4/2019 7:04:00 PM

I am just a simpler writer, and my thoughts are always from the heart. Thank you Jennifer. You are so kind. I appreciate your thoughts. Many wonderful blessings to you. ~ Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2019 5:16:00 PM

Such a cool style you have, Brandy. I like how you mix deep thought with a mixture of long and short interesting lines.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/10/2019 10:23:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Sometimes separating moments, or phrases- helps create the mood within the poem. Your thoughts are always appreciated. ~ Brandy

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 3/24/2019 5:04:00 PM

Much truth in this poem. Well done

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/24/2019 6:52:00 PM

Thank you Allen. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/21/2019 2:34:00 AM

Hi Brandy, a clever and well written poem which I love and have read twice over - nicely penned my friend. Poetry hugs, Jennifer

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/21/2019 10:48:00 AM

Dear Jennifer, thank you for your lovely comment. Such a wonderful thing to say. Your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Chuck Melugin

Date: 3/13/2019 1:54:00 PM

Brandy....You made a huge connection with excellence with this gem! You placed me in awe!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/13/2019 11:10:00 PM

Thank you Chuck. Your thoughts truly humble me. I appreciate your kindness and the compliment. Such a wonderful thing to say. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior

Date: 3/13/2019 8:37:00 AM

The ripples of love & light connect us all...a perfectly pieced piece, Brandy...how are you my friend?...happy peaceful endings...^WW^...{*J*}

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/13/2019 12:34:00 PM

True, we are all connected in some way. Thank you Winged Warrior, for your kind words. I appreciate you. I am doing great. Moments surround me indeed. :) My best to you. ~ Brandy

Eve Roper

Date: 3/11/2019 1:34:00 PM

Perfect write, Brandy, I enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve ~`*

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/11/2019 6:44:00 PM

Thank you Eve! Your thoughts are appreciate. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/11/2019 9:19:00 AM

Imperfectly perfect yet perfectly pieced...Nice...I connected...All the best my friend

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/11/2019 6:43:00 PM

Yes, indeed. Thank you Arturo for your kind words, as they are placed perfectly here. :) My best to you. ~ Brandy

Silent One

Date: 3/10/2019 11:44:00 AM

Another wonderful scribble... Keep scribbling away..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/10/2019 2:58:00 PM

Thank you Silent One. I appreciate your kind words. That is my plan, to keep scribbling. ~ Brandy

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 3/10/2019 10:08:00 AM

Beautiful poetry.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/10/2019 2:57:00 PM

Thank you Sunlite Wanter. I appreciate you taking the time to read this little scribble of mine. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Judy Ball

Date: 3/9/2019 3:42:00 PM

Don't give up yet, God isn't finished yet. Nice job. God Bless, JB

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/9/2019 7:28:00 PM

Thank you Judy!! Simply love your positive outlook. :) Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Constance La France

Date: 3/8/2019 7:44:00 PM

Brandy, I love you little scribble ~

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/8/2019 9:30:00 PM

Thank you Dear Heart. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/7/2019 12:43:00 PM

The beauty of imperfection, marvelous!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/7/2019 4:24:00 PM

Thank you Michelle. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 3/6/2019 7:16:00 AM

Beautiful write Brandy..great 1st line and flow...A fave...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/6/2019 1:02:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. So kind of you to say. :) I appreciate you favoring this little scribble of mine. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 3/5/2019 3:17:00 PM

Yes, we are all imperfect, Brandy. Such a perplexed world we live in. Awesome write! Love the second line :) Hugs Charlie

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/5/2019 7:23:00 PM

Thank you Charlie. There is truth in your words. The world is complicated, only because humans have made that way. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Gerald Greene

Date: 3/4/2019 8:05:00 PM

I hope you have a high opinion of your own writing because this poem is of the highest order. I'm thrilled for you.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/4/2019 8:54:00 PM

Your thoughts truly humble me. I have grown with my words, and I can see the change. Thank you Gerald. I am somewhat speechless, with your praise. ~ Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 3/4/2019 2:22:00 PM

Good afternoon, and well done ma'am. I read this as two people that have real and honest love between them maybe a perfect love (perfectly pieced) and yet life and the journey therein has them on different roads/paths and separated (imperfect to be). Ah, but what do I know? A pleasure to read...TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/4/2019 3:46:00 PM

Good afternoon Tobey. I am amazed at how deep someone will go, to actually embrace the emotions of a poem- and feel them correctly. Your thoughts are appreciated and leave me in awe. Thank you for this wonderful comment. ~ Brandy

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 3/3/2019 10:26:00 PM

'... dreams are tossed like pebbles...' beautiful line... the whole poem is very delicate and, as always, charming (of course)...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/3/2019 10:42:00 PM

Thank you Lawrence! :) And dreams drift in the wind. Ahh, yes- like a pebble playfully tossed upon ripples. Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 3/3/2019 5:30:00 PM

Perhaps two imperfect people can create the prefect pair when they come together or maybe the imperfections are blinded by love. I must ponder these thoughts from your heart. All my best. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/3/2019 7:39:00 PM

Love is.. seeing an imperfect person, perfectly. Everything falls into place, as it should and when the time is right. Thank you John. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/3/2019 4:37:00 PM

I guess because it is meant to be..not a surprise when dreams are tossed in a fountain of wishes. The pieces are connecting the dots perfectly. A doting poem, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/3/2019 7:27:00 PM

Very kind of you to say. Indeed, because anything is possible in a dream. I like to think so. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you Vijay. ~ Brandy