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Perfectly Pieced

in a fountain of wishes, where dreams are tossed like pebbles
                                      hope is rushed, silence hushed - 
                 light being the language of one seeking 

                                  
                                         imperfect to be
                                                  yet,
                                 perfectly pieced are we


                      
              Perplexed: 
                       at how pieces perfectly connect with you
                                     when,                     
                                  imperfect to be 
                                          are we



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~ Just a little Scribble ~
Thoughts from the Heart

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Running Wolves Date: 1/7/2020 4:32:00 PM Beautiful write, imperfect perfection... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 1/7/2020 9:38:00 PM So sweet of you to say. Thank you. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 5/4/2019 1:25:00 AM You are quite the philosopher Nicole - your poems are deep and always thought through perfectly - another beauty! Hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 5/4/2019 7:04:00 PM I am just a simpler writer, and my thoughts are always from the heart. Thank you Jennifer. You are so kind. I appreciate your thoughts. Many wonderful blessings to you. ~ Brandy

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/10/2019 5:16:00 PM Such a cool style you have, Brandy. I like how you mix deep thought with a mixture of long and short interesting lines. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/10/2019 10:23:00 PM Thank you Andrea. Sometimes separating moments, or phrases- helps create the mood within the poem. Your thoughts are always appreciated. ~ Brandy

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. Date: 3/24/2019 5:04:00 PM Much truth in this poem. Well done Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/24/2019 6:52:00 PM Thank you Allen. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 3/21/2019 2:34:00 AM Hi Brandy, a clever and well written poem which I love and have read twice over - nicely penned my friend. Poetry hugs, Jennifer Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/21/2019 10:48:00 AM Dear Jennifer, thank you for your lovely comment. Such a wonderful thing to say. Your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Chuck Melugin Date: 3/13/2019 1:54:00 PM Brandy....You made a huge connection with excellence with this gem! You placed me in awe! Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/13/2019 11:10:00 PM Thank you Chuck. Your thoughts truly humble me. I appreciate your kindness and the compliment. Such a wonderful thing to say. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior Date: 3/13/2019 8:37:00 AM The ripples of love & light connect us all...a perfectly pieced piece, Brandy...how are you my friend?...happy peaceful endings...^WW^...{*J*} Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/13/2019 12:34:00 PM True, we are all connected in some way. Thank you Winged Warrior, for your kind words. I appreciate you. I am doing great. Moments surround me indeed. :) My best to you. ~ Brandy

Eve Roper Date: 3/11/2019 1:34:00 PM Perfect write, Brandy, I enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/11/2019 6:44:00 PM Thank you Eve! Your thoughts are appreciate. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael Date: 3/11/2019 9:19:00 AM Imperfectly perfect yet perfectly pieced...Nice...I connected...All the best my friend Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/11/2019 6:43:00 PM Yes, indeed. Thank you Arturo for your kind words, as they are placed perfectly here. :) My best to you. ~ Brandy

Silent One Date: 3/10/2019 11:44:00 AM Another wonderful scribble... Keep scribbling away.. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/10/2019 2:58:00 PM Thank you Silent One. I appreciate your kind words. That is my plan, to keep scribbling. ~ Brandy

Sunlite Wanter Date: 3/10/2019 10:08:00 AM Beautiful poetry. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/10/2019 2:57:00 PM Thank you Sunlite Wanter. I appreciate you taking the time to read this little scribble of mine. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Judy Ball Date: 3/9/2019 3:42:00 PM Don't give up yet, God isn't finished yet. Nice job. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/9/2019 7:28:00 PM Thank you Judy!! Simply love your positive outlook. :) Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Constance La France Date: 3/8/2019 7:44:00 PM Brandy, I love you little scribble ~ Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/8/2019 9:30:00 PM Thank you Dear Heart. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/7/2019 12:43:00 PM The beauty of imperfection, marvelous! Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/7/2019 4:24:00 PM Thank you Michelle. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Joseph May Date: 3/6/2019 7:16:00 AM Beautiful write Brandy..great 1st line and flow...A fave... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/6/2019 1:02:00 PM Thank you Joseph. So kind of you to say. :) I appreciate you favoring this little scribble of mine. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina Date: 3/5/2019 3:17:00 PM Yes, we are all imperfect, Brandy. Such a perplexed world we live in. Awesome write! Love the second line :) Hugs Charlie Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/5/2019 7:23:00 PM Thank you Charlie. There is truth in your words. The world is complicated, only because humans have made that way. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Gerald Greene Date: 3/4/2019 8:05:00 PM I hope you have a high opinion of your own writing because this poem is of the highest order. I'm thrilled for you. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/4/2019 8:54:00 PM Your thoughts truly humble me. I have grown with my words, and I can see the change. Thank you Gerald. I am somewhat speechless, with your praise. ~ Brandy

Tobey Hill Date: 3/4/2019 2:22:00 PM Good afternoon, and well done ma'am. I read this as two people that have real and honest love between them maybe a perfect love (perfectly pieced) and yet life and the journey therein has them on different roads/paths and separated (imperfect to be). Ah, but what do I know? A pleasure to read...TAH Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/4/2019 3:46:00 PM Good afternoon Tobey. I am amazed at how deep someone will go, to actually embrace the emotions of a poem- and feel them correctly. Your thoughts are appreciated and leave me in awe. Thank you for this wonderful comment. ~ Brandy

Lawrence Sharp Date: 3/3/2019 10:26:00 PM '... dreams are tossed like pebbles...' beautiful line... the whole poem is very delicate and, as always, charming (of course)... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/3/2019 10:42:00 PM Thank you Lawrence! :) And dreams drift in the wind. Ahh, yes- like a pebble playfully tossed upon ripples. Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf Date: 3/3/2019 5:30:00 PM Perhaps two imperfect people can create the prefect pair when they come together or maybe the imperfections are blinded by love. I must ponder these thoughts from your heart. All my best. John Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/3/2019 7:39:00 PM Love is.. seeing an imperfect person, perfectly. Everything falls into place, as it should and when the time is right. Thank you John. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/3/2019 4:37:00 PM I guess because it is meant to be..not a surprise when dreams are tossed in a fountain of wishes. The pieces are connecting the dots perfectly. A doting poem, Brandy. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/3/2019 7:27:00 PM Very kind of you to say. Indeed, because anything is possible in a dream. I like to think so. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you Vijay. ~ Brandy