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      in a fountain of wishes, where dreams are tossed like pebbles
                                      hope is rushed, silence hushed - 
                 light being the language of one seeking 

                                  
                                         imperfect to be
                                                  yet,
                                 perfectly pieced are we


                      
              Perplexed: 
                       at how pieces perfectly connect with you
                                     when,                     
                                  imperfect to be 
                                          are we



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~ Just a little Scribble ~
Thoughts from the Heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/4/2019 1:25:00 AM
You are quite the philosopher Nicole - your poems are deep and always thought through perfectly - another beauty! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/4/2019 7:04:00 PM
I am just a simpler writer, and my thoughts are always from the heart. Thank you Jennifer. You are so kind. I appreciate your thoughts. Many wonderful blessings to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 4/10/2019 5:16:00 PM
Such a cool style you have, Brandy. I like how you mix deep thought with a mixture of long and short interesting lines.
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Date: 4/10/2019 10:23:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. Sometimes separating moments, or phrases- helps create the mood within the poem. Your thoughts are always appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/24/2019 5:04:00 PM
Much truth in this poem. Well done
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Date: 3/24/2019 6:52:00 PM
Thank you Allen. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/21/2019 2:34:00 AM
Hi Brandy, a clever and well written poem which I love and have read twice over - nicely penned my friend. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
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Date: 3/21/2019 10:48:00 AM
Dear Jennifer, thank you for your lovely comment. Such a wonderful thing to say. Your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Date: 3/13/2019 1:54:00 PM
Brandy....You made a huge connection with excellence with this gem! You placed me in awe!
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Date: 3/13/2019 11:10:00 PM
Thank you Chuck. Your thoughts truly humble me. I appreciate your kindness and the compliment. Such a wonderful thing to say. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/13/2019 8:37:00 AM
The ripples of love & light connect us all...a perfectly pieced piece, Brandy...how are you my friend?...happy peaceful endings...^WW^...{*J*}
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Date: 3/13/2019 12:34:00 PM
True, we are all connected in some way. Thank you Winged Warrior, for your kind words. I appreciate you. I am doing great. Moments surround me indeed. :) My best to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/11/2019 1:34:00 PM
Perfect write, Brandy, I enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/11/2019 6:44:00 PM
Thank you Eve! Your thoughts are appreciate. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/11/2019 9:19:00 AM
Imperfectly perfect yet perfectly pieced...Nice...I connected...All the best my friend
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Date: 3/11/2019 6:43:00 PM
Yes, indeed. Thank you Arturo for your kind words, as they are placed perfectly here. :) My best to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/10/2019 11:44:00 AM
Another wonderful scribble... Keep scribbling away..
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Date: 3/10/2019 2:58:00 PM
Thank you Silent One. I appreciate your kind words. That is my plan, to keep scribbling. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/10/2019 10:08:00 AM
Beautiful poetry.
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Date: 3/10/2019 2:57:00 PM
Thank you Sunlite Wanter. I appreciate you taking the time to read this little scribble of mine. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/10/2019 6:08:00 AM
Awesome...
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Date: 3/10/2019 2:56:00 PM
Thank you Mark! Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/9/2019 3:42:00 PM
Don't give up yet, God isn't finished yet. Nice job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/9/2019 7:28:00 PM
Thank you Judy!! Simply love your positive outlook. :) Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/8/2019 7:44:00 PM
Brandy, I love you little scribble ~
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Date: 3/8/2019 9:30:00 PM
Thank you Dear Heart. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/7/2019 12:43:00 PM
The beauty of imperfection, marvelous!
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Date: 3/7/2019 4:24:00 PM
Thank you Michelle. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/6/2019 7:16:00 AM
Beautiful write Brandy..great 1st line and flow...A fave...
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Date: 3/6/2019 1:02:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. So kind of you to say. :) I appreciate you favoring this little scribble of mine. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/6/2019 4:21:00 AM
Loved your scribble. We all have our faults but also we must count our pluses.
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Date: 3/6/2019 12:51:00 PM
Thank you Victor. Yes, we all have imperfections. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/5/2019 3:17:00 PM
Yes, we are all imperfect, Brandy. Such a perplexed world we live in. Awesome write! Love the second line :) Hugs Charlie
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Date: 3/5/2019 7:23:00 PM
Thank you Charlie. There is truth in your words. The world is complicated, only because humans have made that way. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 3/4/2019 8:05:00 PM
I hope you have a high opinion of your own writing because this poem is of the highest order. I'm thrilled for you.
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Date: 3/4/2019 8:54:00 PM
Your thoughts truly humble me. I have grown with my words, and I can see the change. Thank you Gerald. I am somewhat speechless, with your praise. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/4/2019 2:22:00 PM
Good afternoon, and well done ma'am. I read this as two people that have real and honest love between them maybe a perfect love (perfectly pieced) and yet life and the journey therein has them on different roads/paths and separated (imperfect to be). Ah, but what do I know? A pleasure to read...TAH
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Date: 3/4/2019 3:46:00 PM
Good afternoon Tobey. I am amazed at how deep someone will go, to actually embrace the emotions of a poem- and feel them correctly. Your thoughts are appreciated and leave me in awe. Thank you for this wonderful comment. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/3/2019 10:26:00 PM
'... dreams are tossed like pebbles...' beautiful line... the whole poem is very delicate and, as always, charming (of course)...
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Date: 3/3/2019 10:42:00 PM
Thank you Lawrence! :) And dreams drift in the wind. Ahh, yes- like a pebble playfully tossed upon ripples. Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/3/2019 5:30:00 PM
Perhaps two imperfect people can create the prefect pair when they come together or maybe the imperfections are blinded by love. I must ponder these thoughts from your heart. All my best. John
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Date: 3/3/2019 7:39:00 PM
Love is.. seeing an imperfect person, perfectly. Everything falls into place, as it should and when the time is right. Thank you John. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/3/2019 4:37:00 PM
I guess because it is meant to be..not a surprise when dreams are tossed in a fountain of wishes. The pieces are connecting the dots perfectly. A doting poem, Brandy.
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Date: 3/3/2019 7:27:00 PM
Very kind of you to say. Indeed, because anything is possible in a dream. I like to think so. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you Vijay. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/3/2019 3:53:00 PM
Brandy, refreshing insightful Poetry. Your Love fills in the gaps. Enjoyed . . .
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Date: 3/3/2019 7:20:00 PM
Thank you. Love certainly can create a perfect moment. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy