Perfectly Autumn

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autumn comes as a chariot of nature’s flame woodland golds and browns when autumn arrives breathe in gold; feel it extend to your very soul autumn’s leaves will soon rest upon the forest floor feeding wintry roots

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Stephan McBride

Date: 10/28/2023 8:16:00 PM

Beautiful picture and what a poem to enhance, and bring it to life , love it : )

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 10/28/2023 6:30:00 AM

Dear Sara, This is a splendid feast of fall imagery. Thank you for sharing it.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/28/2023 9:16:00 AM

thanks for your visit, Nancy, and for your lovely comments. I like your poetic response, 'a splendid feast of fall imagery.' That was beautiful. Have a lovely day, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/28/2023 6:19:00 AM

Beautiful autumn images, Sara. Splendidly done in vivid colors.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/28/2023 9:16:00 AM

thanks, Vijay, for your visit and uplifting words. Have a wonderful Saturday, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/28/2023 5:23:00 AM

Great Choka with such nice descriptions about fall. It is such a nice and colorful season to delight the soul. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/28/2023 9:17:00 AM

thank you, Ms. Sara, for your visit. Yes, autumn is a delightful season...will miss it...sigh...not a winter fan. Have a splendid day, the 'other' Sara :-)

Silent One

Date: 10/28/2023 2:45:00 AM

Chariot of nature' flames.. love that one.. I am always amazed how you describe autumn so differently... each of your haiku has its own unique imagery and that last one is a great way to finish it.. you are an inspiration dear poetess..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/28/2023 4:36:00 AM

wow, Silent One, your comments lift me up. I'm humbly grateful for your kind words. I'm delighted my words are an inspiration...as are yours for me. Your poems often take me to a different level with their construction, diction, etc. Know you're appreciated beyond words. Enjoy your weekend, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/28/2023 2:02:00 AM

I doubt any season can produce such wonderful haikus as the Fall. Blessings.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/28/2023 4:37:00 AM

I agree with you, Victor. Fall is astounding but will soon be gone...sigh...not a winter fan :-) Have a blessed day, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 10/27/2023 10:33:00 PM

Autumn seems so beautiful through your haiku beautiful soul, your way with words and articulating them is always so impressive and soul warming! Queen of haiku you are! I absolutely love the lines “ chariot of nature’s flame woodland golds and browns” unique and different from what i mostly read! So creative! “ rest upon the forest floor feeding wintry roots“ how do you come up with such lines? So good!!! Queen of haiku! Your imagery in this is beyond impeccable! Absolutely loved reading this

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/28/2023 4:41:00 AM

I always look forward to reading your comments, for you see and appreciate my creations at a soul level--for that I am most grateful. I'm glad the imagery is meaningful and unique...one of my goals when I relax and let words, images just flow. I'm like my crown :-) . Your words make me smile and lift up my spirits. Have a tremendous weekend, hugs from Texas, Sara