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Perfect outfit gone horribly wrong

Ready to go trick or treat Disguised in attire I hit the street I was the helpful nurse With medicine to disburse His eye on me, he fell over his feet So there he lay, flat on his face Another medical case Everyone looked at me The nurse wanna be Needless to say I wish for hidden space So instead of trick or treat I ended up on a whole different beat Next to a hospital bed Having to hold his hand instead And I didn’t even get a sweet 2nd place HALLOWEEN LIMERICK CONTEST Sponsored by: JOHN FREEMAN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/29/2010 4:31:00 AM
Congratulations Wilma on your win in John Freeman's "Halloween Limerick Contest". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2010 6:08:00 PM
excellent write here my friend
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Date: 11/26/2010 11:07:00 AM
I'm glad this witty Limerick made it onto the winners podium Wilma. Many congrats on your win >> James
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Date: 11/26/2010 3:47:00 AM
Congrat my lady across the pond!!!! well done and enjoyed your work s usaully...love Michael
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Date: 11/25/2010 11:08:00 AM
adorable , congrats on your win with this cute entry
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Date: 11/25/2010 4:11:00 AM
comical and imaginative, Wilma. Congratulations to you on your fine win!
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Date: 11/25/2010 3:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest..Sara
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Date: 11/24/2010 9:11:00 PM
Thanks for the sweet write, Wilma. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 11/24/2010 8:58:00 PM
Wilma....Congrats on notching up big win in the contest........ Happy Thanksgiving.....Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/24/2010 8:07:00 PM
Congrats Wilma my friend on your big win in John's contest with this cool Limerick luv.. enjoy another big win tonight with luv..
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Date: 11/24/2010 7:50:00 PM
Hahaha. A wonderful halloween this turned out to be Wilma. Many congratulations for this one.
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Date: 11/24/2010 4:33:00 PM
Great win Wilma. Proud to share with such gret poets. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:44:00 PM
I really like this one and am happy it placed high! Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:33:00 PM
What a great limerick, Wilma....I hope you get a sweet for Thanksgiving, since you didn't on Halloween!!! Congratulaations! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:22:00 PM
Congratyulations on this well deserv ed win, Wilma
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Date: 11/24/2010 1:59:00 PM
Hey, you entered late but you scored BIG. Congratulations, sweet friend.
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Date: 11/24/2010 1:37:00 PM
Congratulations Wilma on your poem well worthy of taking a second place. Happy thanksgiving. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/22/2010 12:49:00 PM
very cute!
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Date: 11/22/2010 6:20:00 AM
Wilma!! Why'd you have to go wearing your mini nurse outfit?!? I told you not that one, missy-- see what happens when you don't listen to me?? you snag a guy---heehee go on and don't listen to me ever, ok!! hahaha enjoyed reading this one! You are so cool to come up with this ;) -- hugs nikko ;)
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:39:00 AM
yea. Wilma, this one is cool and great. i like the sound, mood and symbolism the work carries. love, lightening ink.
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Date: 11/21/2010 9:59:00 AM
Haha, kool one Wilma. Nurses do look so lovely in uniform I have to admit. But more so, they don't get recognised enough. Made me chuckle this fine Sunday >> James :)
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Date: 11/21/2010 9:08:00 AM
haha, what brought you to write one like this? And was it a true story that just happened? that would sure be interesting!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/21/2010 8:26:00 AM
He fell down because men fantasize about beautiful nurses, Wilma! Seeing a knockout like you in this attire was just too much for him. Witty and "sweet" limerick. (I'm sure he would have given you some sweets after he woke up.) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/21/2010 7:10:00 AM
What is important is that the mask comes off ... and we become need and needer ... in love there is only giver and no getter. Amusing write.
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Date: 11/21/2010 5:14:00 AM
Well now I am picturing you in a nurses oufit! cute write that made me smile....Feel a cold coming on , a house call? lol with love Michael
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