Perfect Day Quatern

So quickly gone our perfect day,
softly fading in ombre gray;
we loved, lying in grasses sweet,
mist mountain shrouded and discreet.

Pink pearled the clouds like china clay--
so quickly gone our perfect day--
dangled above the mountain rim;
pearled the wine kisses I offered him.

We strolled hay scented meadows, fair;
he laced white daisies through my hair;
so quickly gone our perfect day 
for night swooped down, dark bird of prey.

Sometimes a day almost like that
makes me wistful, heart acrobat
contriving to return that way,
so quickly gone our perfect day.

Copyright, January 23, 2016
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Gauthier Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 9:53 PM
Totally delightful. Congrats on your win, Faye.
Makama Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:40 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
Haight Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 10:11 AM
Very lovely, Faye. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 6:00 AM
A great write, Faye. Congratulations!
A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 4:16 AM
FAYE, Congrats in Andrea's contest. LINDA
George   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 7:10 PM
Beautiful flawless Quatern, Faye. Many congrats on your 2nd place win. Elaine
Jerden Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Very nice! Congratulations, Faye!
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 6:32 PM
This is so cute, Faye. Glad to see you here on my list. I don't see enough of you at Soup. Thanks for this very delightful example of a well constructed quatern. Congrats.
Allison Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 3:25 PM
so beautifully penned Faye good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 3:59 PM
A very peaceful poem beautifully written. Sounds like a perfect day.A7
Morris Brady Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 2:35 PM
Wonderfully done!
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