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Perfect Day Quatern

So quickly gone our perfect day, softly fading in ombre gray; we loved, lying in grasses sweet, mist mountain shrouded and discreet. Pink pearled the clouds like china clay-- so quickly gone our perfect day-- dangled above the mountain rim; pearled the wine kisses I offered him. We strolled hay scented meadows, fair; he laced white daisies through my hair; so quickly gone our perfect day for night swooped down, dark bird of prey. Sometimes a day almost like that makes me wistful, heart acrobat contriving to return that way, so quickly gone our perfect day. Copyright, January 23, 2016

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Date: 12/6/2017 9:53:00 PM
Totally delightful. Congrats on your win, Faye.
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Date: 3/2/2016 8:40:00 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
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Date: 2/7/2016 10:11:00 AM
Very lovely, Faye. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/7/2016 6:00:00 AM
A great write, Faye. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/7/2016 4:16:00 AM
FAYE, Congrats in Andrea's contest. LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2016 7:10:00 PM
Beautiful flawless Quatern, Faye. Many congrats on your 2nd place win. Elaine
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:52:00 PM
Very nice! Congratulations, Faye!
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:32:00 PM
This is so cute, Faye. Glad to see you here on my list. I don't see enough of you at Soup. Thanks for this very delightful example of a well constructed quatern. Congrats.
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Date: 1/24/2016 3:25:00 PM
so beautifully penned Faye good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/23/2016 3:59:00 PM
A very peaceful poem beautifully written. Sounds like a perfect day.A7
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Date: 1/23/2016 2:35:00 PM
Wonderfully done!
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