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Perfect Day

It was a Sunday Just like any other Sunday The summer glow was exquisite Perfect for a ride in the country As the sun drenched Honey all over God’s creation I was a passenger in the back seat And everyone was quiet Probably like me in awe I soaked in the scenery Like so many other times It didn’t really seem Any different that day Till out of nowhere I was shocked to realize It had been a while that My mind had been elsewhere Outside my window Hovering over those hills In the form of a big hand That supersize hand was me Caressing the long tall grasses I thought I snapped out of it But was so amazed I was able to ease right back Without skipping a beat Into my out of body experience So for miles and miles I was able to caress those rolling hills And their tall blades of warm grasses Ever so grateful for God’s creation AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on June 2, 2018 for contest THESE ARE THE DAYS sponsored by DANIEL TURNER

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Date: 6/3/2018 9:48:00 AM
You don t have to pay in order to imagine things, even for a moment or two but it still takes you in a pleasant world without worries or anything and everyone deserves a break from their daily routine, these are the days, enjoy life, it s too short to spend in worries, enjoy every single moment of it and happiness don t required money, it just required goodwill, it s a really beautiful write and I really enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/3/2018 7:09:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Faraz. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/2/2018 8:26:00 PM
to disappear into your surroundings is something we have all done...what's interesting when that happens is the time and distance covered without notice...good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/2/2018 10:40:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Frederic.
Date: 6/2/2018 2:50:00 PM
You can reach out and touch the clouds and the hills of greenery in that state of mind...A wonderful write...All the best Line
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Date: 6/2/2018 5:34:00 PM
It only happened to me once. No drugs were involved. LOL
Date: 6/2/2018 1:21:00 PM
Very nice experience Line! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 6/2/2018 5:34:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi, for your much appreciated visit.

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