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Perfect Autumn Dawn

Perfect autumn dawn Beyond the fields a’ slumber where silent breezes flow Along a vast horizon, a shimmered amber glow In wishful colored ribbons, adrift upon the sky So beautiful this moment as morning wanders by While dew drops gently glisten out here atop the lawn It’s you I will be loving this perfect autumn dawn Good morning Soupers

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/3/2018 8:44:00 PM

Short, succinct, and captivating, my friend. A FAVE! Here' to those dew drops sticking around for another man, instead of yielding to frost! Best always, Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 11/5/2018 10:47:00 AM

That sounds good to me. :) Thanks so much my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/2/2018 11:56:00 AM

This is a perfectly written Autumn Dawn. I don't forget ribbons in the sky :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/2/2018 12:26:00 PM

Thank you again my friend. We had the most beautiful sunrise here the other morning, one I won't forget either.

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/1/2018 12:23:00 PM

You have that smooth Autumn flow, Chris...lovely verse my friend & thanks for the comment on my recent post, Sting looks better than ever...love & light...^WW^

Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2018 2:53:00 PM

I agree and have you listened to his latest Album/CD, I think it's 54th street or 57th street. It's just as good as anything else he has done. Thanks my friend.