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Perched Falcon

the perched falcon waits in bare limbs of forest tree... a squirrel plays near the falcon makes move squirrel in race for its life.... a tree has heart rot once more the pursued escapes the fate of death's end... squirrel peeks out hole

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Date: 5/16/2019 7:49:00 AM
ha ha, glad to hear the squirrel survived
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/17/2019 6:01:00 PM
Jack, Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate all the visits to my page. Sara
Date: 3/1/2014 9:17:00 AM
Oh Sara...terrific job and many descriptive uses here..love hear rot...yet saved a life...what opposites....awesome visual...
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Date: 2/22/2014 11:44:00 AM
Nice descriptiveness in this triple helping of haiku.
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Date: 2/22/2014 5:31:00 AM
What a fascinated poetic story! Loved it!
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Date: 2/22/2014 4:41:00 AM
Sara this is really quite beautiful I love Haiku and this one is spot on love Jayne x
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Date: 2/21/2014 11:13:00 PM
You have never disappointed me with you great talent. I must confess that the image you printed here is a large screen,I can see the squirrel escaping into the heart rot of the tree. Brilliant.
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Date: 2/21/2014 10:15:00 PM
Ah yes, nature's ways, the way it moves and lives is incredible! I surely loved reading this fantastic poem this evening! What a positively grand sequence of events that you described here, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/21/2014 8:22:00 PM
Sarah, I enjoyed this so much. Two very beautiful creatures each so unique. Nature can sometimes seem so cruel, but I'm glad the squirrel won this time. Take care.
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Date: 2/21/2014 7:31:00 PM
Dear Sara: Enjoyed your haikus. Just an observation: 3rd haiku verse, 1st line, is the word "pursued"? Nice work. Leon
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Date: 2/21/2014 7:11:00 PM
Nice, Sara. The last one was my favorite.
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Date: 2/21/2014 6:34:00 PM
Sara nicely written Haiku. I'm on the side of the squirrel, even though they eat up my bird seed. Warm Smiles, Connie
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