People Love a Parade

Parades prepared for pleasure and pageantry.
Phalanx of performers pound the pavement;
percussion sets the pace; piccolos lead.
Princes and princesses pass by on floats;
painted clowns pantomime, making kids smile
Patient pedestrians peddle their wares while
policemen patrol the streets for problems.
Patrons and parents pack the parking spots
peeling their eyes for a parader they know.
Politicians pitch peppermints and promises.
Parades leave us pleased but played-out.


written March 27, 2018
contest:  Silent One's, Alliteration
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 9:50 PM
Congratulations on your win, Reason, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
George   Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 7:40 AM
I agree with Judith. Many congrats.
S     Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Wow Reason! Amazing alliteration here. Such an interesting take on the theme of the contest. It must have been a challenge to come up with so many "P" words! Congrats on your win!! Best, Judy
Poteet Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 2:17 AM
I use OneLook Dictionary a lot and RhymeZone of course. thanks Judy for the congratulations and comment.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Love the line: Politicians pitch peppermints and promises. Congrats!
Gupta Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 9:18 PM
Wow ... Countless P pleasantly occupied with producing the perfect pageantry ... Congratulations on your nice win ...
Ashley Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 7:16 PM
An awesome alliteration, Reason. Congratulations on your excellent win! Warmest wishes..
Poteet Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 8:48 PM
Thank you, Susan, I'm also pleased with the placement. Glad for the caring comment. Have a great tomorrow.
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 3:27 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, R.A.P. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Poteet Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 8:03 PM
thanks, Anne-Lise, glad for the read and welcome your reply.
One Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 2:47 PM
An extensive use of alliteration, you did really well to use so many words with P.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
Poteet Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 7:54 PM
I am awed that you did not dismiss it on grounds of overuse of one-letter alliteration, Silent One. It flows better than some I've written. Thank you for the placement.
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 7:00 AM
Awesome alliteration..all lines begin with the same letter..bets for a win, RAP.
Poteet Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 8:24 PM
Appreciate your accolades, Vijay.. Thank you so much.
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