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From deep winter slumber, she slowly awakes, and a fresh cycle starts with rebirth. By spring, tiny shoots in deep ruby red, set out to emerge from the earth. A passel of stems grows healthy and strong, encouraging leaves to unfurl. And young baby buds beginning to form, look perfectly round as a pearl. Magnificent blossoms in striking dark pink, have now all begun to bloom. A glorious show she displays every year, enhanced by her sweet perfume. Now flowering is done, and swept by the wind, her once vibrant petals have gone. But glossy green foliage continues to grow and lasts nearly all summer long.

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Date: 10/2/2022 4:37:00 PM
Beautiful, Anne. Congrats on your well deserved top finish ~
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Date: 10/10/2022 6:23:00 PM
Thank you Line. Much appreciated :-)
Date: 10/1/2022 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win. Pretty pretty peonies!
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Date: 10/1/2022 2:05:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. Hope you have a lovely weekend :-)
Date: 9/5/2022 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations on First Place with your beautiful peony poem! I especially love: "from deep winter slumber, she slowly awakens..." I love the personification. Yay Anne!
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Date: 9/5/2022 12:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Ann :-) It did take me awhile to work on as I'd already written an earlier poem about peonies. But the contest inspired me to write a second. So it all worked out. I'm happy you enjoyed reading it :-)
Date: 9/5/2022 6:06:00 AM
Beautifully written Anne. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Date: 9/5/2022 9:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda. I appreciate your visit and kind feedback. Cheers Anne :-)
Date: 9/4/2022 7:30:00 PM
Anne, your wonderful poem evokes the beauteous pleasures of peonies so well. Congratulations on your win, Evelyn :)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/4/2022 8:40:00 PM
Thank you so much. :)
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Date: 9/4/2022 8:11:00 PM
Thank you Evelyn :-) And again congratulations to your on your wonderful rose poem.
Date: 9/4/2022 7:02:00 PM
A beautiful poem Anne about your favourite flower the lovely peonies, they are magnificent as your poem said. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win in Tania’s contest… Belle
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Date: 9/4/2022 7:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Belle. And again congratulations on your 1st place win too. :-)
Date: 9/4/2022 2:00:00 PM
Anne, congratulations on your first place win with your beautiful poem, wonderful imagery!
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Date: 9/4/2022 4:48:00 PM
Hi Tania, It was a lovely and unexpected surprise to win first place. Especially given all the talented poets here. Your contest inspired me to write another poem about my favourite flower. Thank you so much. Im so happy you liked my poem :-)
Date: 8/28/2022 1:59:00 PM
Anne such a lovely poem beautifully described “her once vibrant petals have gone” love that line! Debx
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Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/28/2022 2:55:00 PM
Hi Deb :-) Your visit and kind feedback cheered my day today. Thank you so much my friend :-)

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