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Penultimate Prefix of Passion

As the final glimpse of the sun leads into an everlasting spectacle of twinkling dreams, peeking through turmeric traces of an amber aftermath, I listen to the nesting nightingales croon nostalgic lullabies, and search for a celestial ray that would illustrate, the beginning of butterflies within my glass heart. When twilight is just a mere mirage in the distance of my destitute mind, and tune of your laughter reverberates in rhapsodic refrain; a raspy rhythm ringing through rustic breeze, whilst the whistling wind waves to the dandelions dancing to your delicate drumbeats, scintillating stars fall upon our silhouettes, scattering pieces of who I once used to be- within pulsating flesh and bones, before I felt the warmth of your cosmic whispers. Now initials of your amethyst song is the penultimate prefix to my path of healing, where sentimental sighs between us, unveil wordless smiles electrifying a classical crescendo; awaiting beneath instrumental wings. I count the flickering jewels, splattered across nocturnal night-skies, questioning if this is another start of a weary winter? or is this just a seasonal distraction, intoxicating my procrastinating pen, or is your voice a heaven-sent elixir, to soothe the satanic seas evaporating black salt- drizzling toxic rain, upon my porcelain choir, synchronizing a symphony of soulmates destined to reunite and rewrite a roseate rendezvous. Maybe, fate reignited to align the emerald glow between you and I, Maybe, I’ve long been a wanderer, on a quest to reach the rainbow swirls above your musky garden, where background music is the poetry woven from your cryptic ink. You’ll always remain the last maestro in my carnival of chaos, amidst the loudness of screeching demons chattering within every darkest sheet of dreary December.

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Date: 11/23/2023 7:16:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "The Last Organ Grinder" write again. Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
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Date: 11/22/2023 11:35:00 AM
You’ll always remain the last organ grinder in my carnival of chaos, amidst the loudness of screeching demons chattering within every darkest sheet of dreary December... Loved that last stanza and how one person can save someone from their carnival of chaos... must be a keeper... hope you can help his music stay alive.. even when his last song has been sung... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 11/18/2023 7:51:00 AM
Ink Empress, such lovely alliteration throughout your vignettes here. The last two are my favorites. A difficult prompt to which you wrote so well. I picture you walking away, perhaps home, from a celebration losing sight as the sound continues for longer while.
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Date: 11/5/2023 2:52:00 AM
I am always transported to a wonderlad on reading your poems. How can I assess your poetry using the right words? Your poems stand above my reach of assessment. As you wish, let there happen a synchronizing of symphony of soulmates destined to renunite and may they see face to face united in mind and soul in a roseate rendezvous.Let me cut short with the exclamation..... "How marvelous" ! Btw...After the trip so much remains undone. To set the house back to order itself will take a few days. I know your pen has been relentlessly pouring forth celestial symphonies. I shall read them as and when I get time.
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Date: 11/5/2023 9:34:00 AM
Awwn so sweet of you and thoughtful of you to come visit my page despite your hectic schedule! Thank you kind soul! I appreciate you so very much. I hope everything gets easy soon. Yes when we get back from travels, its like coming back to reality, sending you light today and always
Date: 11/4/2023 6:27:00 AM
This is what poetry becomes in the creation of your talent. too good, we feel like reading again and again
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Date: 11/5/2023 9:35:00 AM
This is such a sweet and kind comment, im so very grateful for your support, thank you so much for visiting and leaving your thoughts appreciate you always
Date: 11/2/2023 3:36:00 AM
Written in free verse, yet so smooth with a great flow, not to mention the fabulous diction you use. A marvel of a poem. Blessings.
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Date: 11/5/2023 9:36:00 AM
Thank you victor always for your kind support truly grateful
Date: 11/1/2023 3:02:00 PM
an "upsetting" poem, this is warm and inspiring, thank you poet
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Date: 11/1/2023 1:01:00 PM
Your poetry is stunning, turmeric traces, just one of the many incredible lines, I could state more but it would mean rewriting your poem here, loved it
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Date: 11/1/2023 11:49:00 AM
Sparkling images and metaphors make this beautiful, interesting work such a delight to read, Ink. Thank you for sharing this elegant work. Hugs,
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Date: 11/1/2023 9:08:00 AM
Ahhh!! This one reads like you once had a romantic relationship going on with a special person who is no longer on the scene but will always be special in your heart. Very descriptive and expressive lines you have written. Thanks for sharing it and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 11/1/2023 5:52:00 AM
--I listen to the nesting nightingales croon nostalgic lullabies, and search for a celestial ray that would illustrate, the beginning of butterflies within my glass heart---WOW! your gift of vocabulary shines throughout this poem, Ink. Much enjoyed your take on the contest theme. The lines that brought it all together for me: You’ll always remain the last organ grinder in my carnival of chaos--splendidly done in alliteration and metaphors.
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Date: 10/31/2023 8:51:00 PM
celestial ray that would illustrate, the beginning of butterflies within my glass heart… mmm yessss … initials of your amethyst song is the penultimate prefix to my path of healing,.. the sweet smells of new beginnings r just oooooooooo ., flickering jewels, splattered across nocturnal night-skies,.. damn papi.. the way u get me excited from ur words.. organ grinder in my carnival of chaos,.. ooo papiiii.. love the ending .. this gorgeous piece makes me miss the ignition of somethng new … sigh.. XD
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Date: 10/31/2023 8:38:00 PM
My gosh, this has to be one of the top takes for the contest, I've read so far.. Your vocabulary and meticulous wordplay truly elevated me to a magical world of euphoria and love~ so poetic are your descriptions, sequined with gemstones, colours, fairytale-like atmosphere, wow, pure magnificence you've displayed here! Everything about this piece reflects perfection, but I love that 4th stanza sooo much, it's very evocative..Those alliterations definitely gifted a lyrical flow to your words, dear
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Date: 10/31/2023 8:46:00 PM
"tune of your laughter reverberates in rhapsodic refrain; a raspy rhythm ringing through rustic breeze", "is your voice a heaven-sent elixir, to soothe the satanic seas evaporating black salt-drizzling toxic rain" Ahh, all those musical lines truly touched my heart! "where music is the poetry woven from your cryptic ink", "fate reignited to align the roseate glow between you and I" And that ending as well, extremely heartfelt and beautiful! I am sure that this poem will do brilliant in the contest, best of luck to you, absolutely nailed it!
Date: 10/31/2023 4:43:00 PM
the alliterations you use throughout this poem are elegant to the reader, dear poet, you are not a writer of words rather you are a writer of feelings put into words that reach inside and touch the soul
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Date: 10/31/2023 10:49:00 PM
Thats a very deep observation dear Frederick, you are right i cant write fiction i write feelings and im amazed that you felt that and also felt my poem. Thank you so much truly for your visit
Date: 10/31/2023 3:27:00 PM
Wow IE….simply just beautiful! So many wonderful and special lines “turmeric traces of an amber aftermath” lovely!!! Debx
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Date: 10/31/2023 10:48:00 PM
Thank you so much always for your sincere support truly grateful
Date: 10/31/2023 2:16:00 PM
Very, very beautiful- and honest, Ink! I loved this. You were given quite a gift. :)
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Date: 10/31/2023 10:48:00 PM
Awwn thank you so much so kind of you im grateful
Date: 10/31/2023 2:11:00 PM
Dear Ink, this is an insightful and heartfelt poem, replete with feeling. Gorgeous poem that symbolizes the boundless union. This piece of artistry has left me feeling quite stirred by its exquisite craftsmanship. Its shimmering splendor and agonizing loss conjure a surreal world of motivation and love engraved in the celestial bodies eternally. These soulmates, fated to create love's harmonizing songs, nurture devotion for endless lives, allowing everybody to share in its deep core. Best wishes
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Date: 10/31/2023 10:43:00 PM
Thank you for your best wishes and kind feedback so thoughtful and so encouraging truly! I am grateful always for your sincere comments and support
Date: 10/31/2023 2:10:00 PM
a unique and fabulous take on the contest prompt. Your poem was full of well-crafted images and words that conveyed true human emotions. I appreciate the soulful vulnerability you expressed at every turn. I found your poem intoxicating, powerful, and poignant. You have such a beautiful poetic voice and style that tugs at my heartstrings every time. Your gift is rare. Of course, I'll fav this one. At this moment I'm at a loss for the right words. Ending was powerful. I wanted to applaud! hugs!
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Date: 10/31/2023 10:41:00 PM
Omg im tearing up as i read this comment, you have no idea dear beautiful sara how much i appreciate your feedback. Truly touched my soul. And yes it is a poem that comes from a deep place again. But you know silent one dunno what he would like lol hard for him to be impressed. And this prompt was hard for me. Thank u once again
Date: 10/31/2023 2:06:00 PM
What a wonderful story/write. "Love It" Good Luck... Have a wonderful day...................
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Date: 10/31/2023 10:39:00 PM
Thank you so very much always truly wish you the same
Date: 10/31/2023 1:23:00 PM
Wow..the way this breathtaking piece is inked has pulled at my heartstrings..the haunting melancholy and beauty of this piece is like a dream, engulfed in the imagery of yearning and a deep love, written in the stars. Soulmates destined to create the tunes of love, curating the art of love for many lifetimes, for all to experience..so beautifully inked my beautiful soul sis! I’m so enthralled with the ending of this piece..a profound and poignant ending to this deep and powerful brilliance!
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Date: 10/31/2023 10:39:00 PM
Awwn my beautifully biased soul sis! I appreciate how you always make me feel like my poems are good enough! Thank you so very much
Date: 10/31/2023 1:20:00 PM
- "a symphony of soulmates destined to reunite" ... we all need it after "a weary winter" ... a deep poem with a lot of feelings, Ink :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 10/31/2023 10:38:00 PM
Thank you beautiful Anne Lise, i appreciate your support always truly

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