Pen In Hand - Ziket

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Ziket: 2-line poetry form invented by Dr,Zik: 1st line max 8 syllables, 2nd line max 5 syllables

painting in extreme brevity poignant images posted on August 11, 2020

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Date: 8/13/2020 4:41:00 PM

very nice, LIne. I came to see if you like dashes after line one. Maybe not important in this form!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/13/2020 7:39:00 PM

Dashes not required, neither is a "turn" like in haiku.

Date: 8/12/2020 5:29:00 PM

A great painting, indeed!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2020 9:59:00 PM

Thank you, Newton. Much appreciated.

Date: 8/12/2020 9:44:00 AM

A new poetry form for me to learn! Nicely done, Line. I'll have to try it. ~Mark

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2020 10:56:00 AM

Thankfully the learning curve is not too harsh for this one ~

Date: 8/12/2020 2:57:00 AM

Lovely write Line..

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2020 7:06:00 AM

Thanks, Jenish. Much appreciated.