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peak hiku

the mountain peak embraced by sky's expanse clouds d r i f t past

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Date: 5/6/2025 12:45:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations, dear poetess on your top win in this contest with a lovely hiku depicting a mountain peak. It conveys such a vivid image. Wish you a delightful awakening to the coming day.
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Date: 5/6/2025 12:33:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea, On your achievement entirely on merit. Yours is a picturesque portrait of a Haiku Many thanks for your comment on Toy Howard
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Date: 5/5/2025 11:57:00 AM
Lovely- I'm in the mountains, myself, lol
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Date: 5/5/2025 4:04:00 AM
What a stunning Haiku! I could see it vividly like I am there! Congratulations dear Andie. ^____^JCB
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Date: 5/4/2025 4:08:00 PM
Awesome layout. I felt as though I was on that cloud. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 5/4/2025 3:20:00 PM
Interesting form. Captures a moment quite well. Great imagery.
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Date: 5/4/2025 11:19:00 AM
Lovely imagery and format, Andrea! I feel my eyes aloft, feel the embrace and see the clouds.
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Date: 5/3/2025 5:30:00 PM
A charming nature poem.I love it
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