peach

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For a fruity haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin

sun and summer breeze blows orbs on branches laden ~ yellow-red and ripe

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Tom Woody

Date: 5/24/2025 11:59:00 AM

Sweet peaches, a gift from a generous Creator. Nice haiku David

David Crandall
Date: 5/24/2025 12:02:00 PM

peaches - hard to beat!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/24/2025 11:50:00 AM

- Tempting with sun-ripened fruit, David :) - Best wishes :) - I have to do one too :) - hugs

David Crandall
Date: 5/24/2025 12:01:00 PM

I think you should sample each fruit before deciding which one to write about :-)