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Peaceful Sight

Sky Soft Blue Spreads around Clouds like words Speaking in motion Drift away, drift away Floating in peace while watching Such an offer from high above To let go and to still feel the ground Peace from sight, without any kind of sound Heidi Sands

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/6/2021 7:04:00 PM

Gorgeous example of an ethereal Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/7/2021 5:56:00 AM

I appreciate your kind support. Thank you :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/2/2021 1:13:00 PM

Your words manage to take us along with you, Heidi...offering us the same peaceful feelings as your mind and soul float away from earth's pull. ~ Best regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/2/2021 8:04:00 PM

So nice to hear Paul. I write to reach the reader. Thank you. I hope all is well :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/2/2021 1:55:00 AM

Heidi, a dreamy write!

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/2/2021 5:55:00 AM

Thank you Kim :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/1/2021 9:11:00 PM

You know me, that little boy in me is always watching the clouds change shape:) Such a peaceful feeling, reading your lines today, Heidi. I hope you are well.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/2/2021 5:54:00 AM

I watch them the same way, DT. I am happy that you find this to be peacefu. Thank you. I hope you have a nice day :)

Judy Ball

Date: 4/29/2021 11:14:00 AM

Lovely Heidi. I love to watch the clouds. You put in words my feelings exactly. Wonderful. God Bless, JB

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/29/2021 1:49:00 PM

Thank you Judy. I really enjoy watching them too. Today it was all gray though. I appreciate your comment. :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/29/2021 8:43:00 AM

"Clouds like words speaking in motion", Wonderful write Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/29/2021 9:20:00 AM

Thank you very much Joseph :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 4/29/2021 7:04:00 AM

Heidi, Your clouds stillness; so calming for a weary mind wracked in fleeting thoughts. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/29/2021 7:18:00 AM

That is great to hear Richard. I was trying to write my way out of weary mind and fleeting thoughts too. Thank you. Take care, my friend. I hope your day goes well :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/28/2021 12:01:00 PM

Outstanding imagery depicted in an Etheree form. Great writing, dearest Heidi! Hugs xxx

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/28/2021 12:28:00 PM

Thank you very much Demetrios. I always appreciate your comments. Take care. Hugs :)

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/27/2021 8:06:00 PM

I could feel serenity in this beautiful write! More to come! Thank you for visiting my page.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/28/2021 6:12:00 AM

Thank you JCB :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/26/2021 9:40:00 PM

LOve the mood, the form and especially the poetry. Yes so serene.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/27/2021 5:23:00 AM

I am happy to hear that Harry. Thank you! I hope you have a nice day :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/26/2021 1:02:00 PM

You have so eloquently described the vision you behold such as the reader can enjoy also, lovely! Happy Monday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/26/2021 1:08:00 PM

Thank you Mike. I am happy to hear your feedback. Happy Monday xxoo :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/26/2021 10:24:00 AM

I live to watch them gracefully travel across the sky, I always look for objects, pareidolia I think its called. Hope you're well Heidi. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/26/2021 10:35:00 AM

That is nice Tom. I always love to watch them. Thank you for your visit and kind comment. I hope you are well too :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/25/2021 5:34:00 PM

Just peace...Always so tender Heidi...Nice one...I did an Etheree before...it's not easy.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/25/2021 7:09:00 PM

Hi Arturo. Yes, peace. So important. Thank you very much :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/25/2021 11:11:00 AM

Images from soft blue sky adorn your poem Heidi...I enjoyed the tone of your poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/25/2021 11:45:00 AM

I am happy to hear you enjoyed it Vijay. Thank you very much :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/25/2021 8:22:00 AM

Beautiful piece, Heidi. I felt myself drifting away in the flow of your words. Nice job!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/25/2021 8:44:00 AM

Nice to hear Milton. Thank you very much :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/25/2021 8:11:00 AM

Yes clouds drift in utter silence but bring about a calmness over us that is inexplicable and all this as we stand firmly on terra firma. Awesome poem Heidi, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/25/2021 8:12:00 AM

Thank you very much Jennifer :)