PEACEFUL BEACH

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beach, Sand, Clouds, Sea, Caribbean, Water, Peaceful, Nature, Landscape ...

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PEACEFUL BEACH before the blue shore where the wind shapes the coarse sand time seems to stand still

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Sotto Poet

Date: 6/18/2025 6:28:00 PM

Your metaphors are so captivating, and the shore seems to be the perfect spot for this scorching season.

Yellow Rose
Date: 6/19/2025 4:20:00 AM

thank you...your words are both supporting and encouraging.

Texas Cowboy

Date: 6/18/2025 5:25:00 PM

Love the imagery and the beach sounds like the place to be during these hot Texas summers. That's one pleasant photo at the top. You're not one of them side-saddle gals, are you? Tex

Yellow Rose
Date: 6/19/2025 4:21:00 AM

glad you liked the imagery and the idea of a peaceful beach. A side-saddle girl? Hmmmmm.....how about a 'no saddle' girl. I love horses but not riding on them, :-) yr

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/18/2025 3:24:00 PM

Yes, yes, yes. The world and its troubles seem far removed from such a scene. ~ Gershon

Yellow Rose
Date: 6/18/2025 4:17:00 PM

reminds me of the beaches at the Cayman Islands. I once dreamed of living there (when I was much younger). Oh, the tranquility and simplicity....yellow rose