Peace of Mind

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Kai's Peace of Mind Contest ~ 7/27/25

I've always believed that I was aware of where my thoughts lie even when they suddenly arrive unbidden, as a foe or friendly ally. Sometimes grabbing my attention, sifting around in my mind, even those I attempt to suppress, the ones that may seem unkind. Do my thoughts lead to awareness or is it the other way around? Through an arc of enlightenment, peace of mind was found. I discerned that I am able to know whether I'm deluded or clear~ Thinking gives way to awareness when allowed to draw near. There seems to be a slim boundary that separates the two, often transparent, like a gossamer veil I can nearly see through. I realized that I shouldn't suppress my thoughts as they arise, or my awareness may be obscured; surely that would be unwise. Does wisdom come to me through thought and meditation? I believe it does because I feel a sense of positive connotation, or an intrinsic vision that fills my mind with a spiritual calm. Peace of mind soothes my stress like a gentle healing balm.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/28/2025 7:45:00 AM

Lin, you make an interesting point. Some of us know when we’re fooling ourselves— denial of reality. There’s a little bit of that in normal people, but only a bit. What’s so amazing is thinking about how thoughts come to us. It’s meditative to think about all the thought triggers we have. Poem is really amazing in its ability to address thinking and awareness.

Lin Lane
Date: 7/28/2025 8:33:00 AM

Being aware of our triggers takes focus but well worth the effort not to get shot. Temperance wins out over belligerence. Thanks, Duke.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/28/2025 5:17:00 AM

Dear Lin, What a breath of fresh air this morning! Moving with calm certainty, as if you had spent time in deep reflection and returned with a handful of light. Lin, it truly brought me a sense of peace this morning. :) Summer Blessings, My Dear Lin, Daniel

Lin Lane
Date: 7/28/2025 7:31:00 AM

G'morning and thanks a lot, Daniel. It's not always an easy task to ignore what annoys us, but stress free when we accomplish it.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/27/2025 4:39:00 PM

excellent quote to go with your poem Lin! I especially love the final stanza - write on my friend! hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 7/27/2025 5:26:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. Peace of mind is achieved when stressful situations and people are ignored.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 7/27/2025 11:47:00 AM

Tranquilly enjoyed read of your very nice poem!

Lin Lane
Date: 7/27/2025 5:22:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Abdullah.