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Peace of Heart - Potd

Times when I felt my life is spent. Should I yearn for happiness? I feel I am like a towel That absorbed too much. Has it been washed Far too many times? Or like a colourful hummingbird that lost its joyous tune And can only grumble At injustice and senile shame? Behind the dark clouds of everyday The sun shines bright and clear, Emitting golden beams, Enriching the deep galaxy, Around it circle myriads Of gaseous nebulas And gorgeous stars. And as I contemplate this greatness I know I'm not alone, I smile a little hopefully And feel peace in my heart.

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Date: 11/6/2022 6:52:00 PM
Victor! Well now! I missed your POTDbut am catching up some now.you have a heart that loves. This is a poem in which you ponder. Very nicely presented to us as readers and to the cosmos/God as well. sO Good to see you again! Bless you!
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Date: 11/6/2022 5:33:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on an amply deserved POTD, Victor.
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Date: 11/5/2022 5:21:00 AM
I’m pleased to read you feel peace in your heart Victor, lovely poetry. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 11/4/2022 10:35:00 PM
Congratulations Victor. Wonderful poem.
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Date: 11/4/2022 2:53:00 PM
Way to go. Congratulations on your poem being POTD. It is very expressive and descriptive. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 11/4/2022 7:53:00 AM
Keep smiling, Victor :) Congratulations on your POTD!
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Date: 11/4/2022 7:45:00 AM
a very well deserved POTd. Congrats, my friend.
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Date: 11/4/2022 4:03:00 AM
Amen. That's one way to find peace and/orvhappiness
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Date: 11/3/2022 7:51:00 PM
You're not alone my dear friend, because God is always near. Continue to be that *towel* and absorb as much happiness as you possibly can. Peace will always surround your heart. Tender and sincere are your thoughts. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 11/3/2022 3:29:00 PM
Hello Victor, oh this is splinded. i like this poem ver much. Congrat on the POTD This will be my fav. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 11/3/2022 2:17:00 PM
Victor, a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor
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Date: 11/3/2022 12:05:00 PM
I'm back with congratulations on POTD. A wonderful verse! :)
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Date: 11/3/2022 11:11:00 AM
Very nicely penned Victor, Congrtas on POTD
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Date: 11/3/2022 10:50:00 AM
Victor, wonderful write. Congratulations on POTD~ Warren
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Date: 11/3/2022 10:39:00 AM
Beautiful heart and soul you display here Victor . Your humanness and your deep appreciation for life . Big congratulations on POTD! Hugs, Susan :)
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Date: 11/3/2022 10:01:00 AM
back with congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 11/3/2022 9:30:00 AM
Victor, there is so much truth in your words - "behind the dark clouds of everyday the sun shines bright and clear." What a beautiful metaphor for the presence of love that is always waiting for us. Wonderful imagery. I really like the way your poem transitions from frustration to hope. Thank you for sharing this gem of life wisdom! Blessings for every season to you. Congratulations on your POTD!
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Date: 11/3/2022 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 11/3/2022 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Victor. The second and third stanza give hope and assurance - we are never alone. Best ~ Mala
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Date: 11/3/2022 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.D., Victor!
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Date: 11/3/2022 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD honor for this heartfelt poetry, my friend. Enjoy your special day, Victor. Bill
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Date: 11/3/2022 7:06:00 AM
Another beautiful piece of your heart Victor…..Congratulations! Cuddles…..Debx
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Date: 11/3/2022 6:23:00 AM
Victor, what a beautiful POTD! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/3/2022 6:22:00 AM
The feeling that I am not alone makes our gloomy hours bright! Back to your poem with Congratulations on your POTD
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Date: 11/3/2022 5:44:00 AM
Back with congratulations on the honor of your POTD Victor! hugs
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