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Peace-Loving Waters

PEACE-LOVING WATERS r i p p l e s in the water give me goosebumps. the l a b y r i n t h of comely swoosh, the quacking ducks sail upon its u n d u l a t i on. ~ little ones, likewise, s w i s h their feet and hands through the silky coolness of reflections. ~ a cerulean sky, a lovely water bank - alluring lovers with ladle hands. ~ tender t i n k l i n g tremors s p l a s h inside my head releasing e n d o r p h i n s. ~ the r i p p l i n g of our creator's pleasure across our human landscape. a s c i n t i l l a t i n g summer day ~ 8/25/2017 ~ Ripples in the water contest

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Date: 8/27/2017 2:17:00 PM
Love the lines "creator's pleasure" Good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2017 3:22:00 PM
Thanks, Janis! :)
Date: 8/25/2017 8:59:00 AM
REALLY lovely--especially the lines about God, Kim. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2017 9:01:00 AM
Thank you, Janice :)
Date: 8/24/2017 6:33:00 PM
I enjoyed the timeline it is beautiful, Kim, Luck in the contest... ~*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2017 6:38:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 8/24/2017 5:40:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to the peace-loving waters and the ripples they make!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2017 6:19:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
Date: 8/24/2017 4:44:00 PM
Lovely descriptive poem Kim, now I don't ever recall reading the word e n d o r p h i n s, in a poem before, well written and good luck for the contest, regards, Kevin
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2017 4:49:00 PM
Thanks, Kevin!

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