Barbara Gorelick Poet Limerick

Pay the Piper

She sat on her butt for a year 
Eating cookies, pretzels and beer
Now  looked at the scale
And started to wail
God, look at the size of my rear 



for Carolyn's contest
Sadly, a true story

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Daniel Cwiak May 27, 2010 at 10:58 AM Great write Barb. Congrats on your win in the contest! Dan C

John Freeman May 26, 2010 at 5:23 PM Congratulations Barbara, on your fifth place, agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 26, 2010 at 12:39 PM Congrats BG on your big win in the Bulge contest with this great write.. enjoy your win.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Joyce Johnson May 26, 2010 at 10:17 AM If we could see ourselves as others see us. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire May 26, 2010 at 9:36 AM Isn't that the way it goes? Had a great laugh and want to wish you congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, carolyn

John Loving Iii May 25, 2010 at 2:11 PM i ment, no lady friends. not offeneded. yours john

James Peranteau May 23, 2010 at 5:31 PM Another great entry ! I'm glad I did stop in ! james

Amy Green May 23, 2010 at 10:01 AM HAHAHA! Loved it! GL in the contest!

Dr.Ram Mehta May 23, 2010 at 2:49 AM It is though a sad story but full of humor, Barbara' Read mine for a diagnose.

James Marshall Goff May 22, 2010 at 4:16 PM got a chuckle out of this fun limerick! BG! jimbo

Daniel Cwiak May 22, 2010 at 3:24 PM Like Rooster Cogburn once said, "Reminds me of me!" (Not the She part) Good luck in the contest. Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2010 at 2:08 PM well done BARBARA< good luck,..p.d.

Nigel Fox May 22, 2010 at 1:49 PM Factual Very truthfull Disappearing now All too painful ! Very good !

Skat A May 22, 2010 at 1:37 PM FUNNY WRITE

John Loving Iii May 22, 2010 at 12:43 PM your not making any friends with this one

James Fraser May 22, 2010 at 12:35 PM A cookie kool Limerick Barbara, good luck in Carolyn's contest. I'm of to get fat, haha >> James

John Freeman May 22, 2010 at 12:29 PM Haaaaa! your title says it all, Barbara, that's the only way, the piper must be fed! Carolyn's got her work cut out for her judging from the ones I've read. Good luck. Agape, moses

Larry Belt May 22, 2010 at 12:18 PM LOL......Too Funny.....Awesome Barbara.....Larry