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Pausing For A Breath Nature works wonders, The whiff of fragrant air, The murmuring waves, The thickets resting on the banks, The flowers smiling in the cozy sunny rays, Makes young hearts dance to their tunes. We wait by the glistening waves, Wondering why the mind hadn't known, That the heart can ne'er be cherished, In the dense woods of people, Yearning for joy in the forests of clamour, Was but a mischief of the learned. Keeping the heart afar from God's law, Can best be unveiled by the thirsty soul, By worshipping the purity of nature, Tripping over the dewy pearls, Fleeing from the fetters of manmade expectations We paused for a breath on our way to our hilly sojourn. The distances woven by times parted, Tranquility descended and repaired our broken hearts, I held his outstretched hand, Walked down the glade h tears rolling down, The heart was lighter, For I saw a new life in our horizon. Balveen Cheema Oct.6, 2015 Contes:Any Poem Written Before Joining Poetry Soup Sponsor:Poet Destroyer A

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Date: 10/19/2015 11:44:00 PM
Balveen, Congratulations on your sweet win. ~SKAT~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/20/2015 12:33:00 AM
Thanks dear Skat!
Date: 10/17/2015 8:43:00 AM
Thank you Paul for being so appreciative! Regards, Balveen
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Date: 10/17/2015 8:32:00 AM
A lovely poem full of beautiful imagery, Balveen. Yes, nature does work wonders, leading us to meditate on the one who created it. ~ Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 10/17/2015 1:01:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Balveen!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/17/2015 5:59:00 AM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 10/16/2015 8:59:00 PM
Hi Balveen, Congratulations on your win, thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "I'm not a terrorist" if you would like or have time. Always & Forever LINDA
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/17/2015 5:59:00 AM
My pleasure Linda and many thanks!
Date: 10/16/2015 7:25:00 PM
Beautiful one. Congrats on your win.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/17/2015 6:00:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!

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