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Paulette -- 1

My heart goes out to my good friend Paulette. Her husband of ten years left suddenly. His parting words she never will forget, and from her dark abyss she can’t break free. He said, “I just don’t love you anymore. I’m sorry, but my heart I can’t ignore.” Poor sweet Paulette is wounded to the core. November 21, 2021 entered in the Paulette 1 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Date: 12/15/2021 9:59:00 AM
Janice, congratulations on your placement in Julia's contest, great writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 12/15/2021 1:22:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 12/14/2021 10:48:00 PM
"Poor sweet Paulette is wounded to the core" - Beautiful line. The whole poem is beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/14/2021 2:28:00 PM
Wonderful win. Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 11/21/2021 10:23:00 AM
"Pau" is Hawaiian for, "finished, over, done" so she might wish to choose another root for offspring . . . . .
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/21/2021 3:04:00 PM
Uh, well--okay, Rico.

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