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Patina lady, with torch in hand, bastion of freedom in a promised land. Now perish the principles upholding your base by the internment of children in a zoo like place. Patina lady when you were young homeless from many shores did come and gathered grateful at your hem, American dream in view for them. Patina lady, green like money that flows through bytes as Wall Street honey. No longer are welcomed the “tired and the poor.” Put up a wall and shut the back door. Patina lady, green like sickness Let's clean you up to bronze with quickness. There’s an urgent need to renovate a nation that doesn't tolerate. 6/27/18 Protest poem : A poem with a message N/A Judged 4/6/19 NA re-run Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Date: 6/28/2018 6:11:00 AM
Sian.. I enjoyed reading your work this morning. Always nice to check out creative lines with a cup of coffee!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/28/2018 10:44:00 AM
Glad it added to your morning coffee but this is a serious issue. We are sinking to a new low.

Book: Shattered Sighs