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Wtitten 28 April 2025

Write Fourteen Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest

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“With patience and perseverance We can win the hardiest race.”- By author ************************************************************** Patience and Perseverance On the journey of life when we embark Let patience allied with perseverance Be the lighthouse, our path to lit with spark And permeate our spirit with endurance; When wilful whirling winds waft down our soul Let us not yield to dark clouds of despair But forge ahead steadfast towards our goal Without a single shaggy seam of scare; Let`s not try the hilltop at once to clinch As we may tumble down a dizzy slope But, move forward step by step, inch by inch With patience and perseverance to cope; With patience we earn the Lord`s divine grace, With perseverance we win the tough race.

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Date: 5/6/2025 9:02:00 AM
Nice alliteration Krishnanand and good advice. Congratulations! :)
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/6/2025 10:01:00 AM
Thank you Linda for appreciating the above poem and for your kind wishes. Wishing you the blessings of light in your journey of life.
Date: 5/3/2025 12:24:00 PM
Krishnard, your great poetry tackles themes of perseverance, mercy, and the fight between outward views and one's own voice— Congratulations on your excellent poem in the contest:) - Have a wonderful weekend.
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/4/2025 11:08:00 AM
Dear poet thank you for so kindly going through the above poem and appreciating it. Your kind wishes are welcome. May your weekend be filled with blessings of light.
Date: 5/3/2025 9:18:00 AM
Hi, Krishnanand :) - Congratulations on your fourteen beautiful lines in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/3/2025 11:49:00 AM
Thank you friend for your kind wishes. Wish you a pleasant weekend filled with blessings.
Date: 4/29/2025 3:44:00 PM
Hello Guptar, wow! this poem has a lot to say. Well iam making this poem my fav. Blessing my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/30/2025 6:08:00 AM
Hello Guptar, Thank you for the blessing to brighten my day. I wish you a great day and the light to brightenhyour day. Blessings my frkiend. /Darlene/
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 4/29/2025 11:04:00 PM
Thanks a lot, dear friend or appreciating this poem and making it your fav. Would the blessings of light brighten your day.
Date: 4/29/2025 3:25:00 AM
pays-shunts can purse-severe-ants..... ....stan
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 4/29/2025 10:32:00 AM
Thank you poet friend for your visit to my page. Wish you a pleasant day

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