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Pausing to breathe in hours’ rhythmic motion Allow screech of city whistles its knell-- There, under maples be hushed by floral sways Imbue the gentle taps from dew, like so Enter into air’s float where quiet ripples abide: Notice how leaves slow -dance to await Cycles of interludes wholly accepting Endurance through PATIENCE, time’s blest harvest. ------------ 3/10/2019 Writing Challenge, March 2019- Inspirational Acrostic Sponsored by Dear Heart

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Date: 3/15/2019 10:34:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Nette, you've captured your inspirational word perfectly with great imagery. Congratulations on your great win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/15/2019 7:57:00 PM
Awesome Nette, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/15/2019 11:13:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent Acrostic and I love the image too ~
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Date: 3/15/2019 10:20:00 AM
Endurance through Patience. Very nice, nette. Congrats.
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Date: 3/15/2019 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 3/15/2019 5:41:00 AM
Back for congrats! Lovely language!
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Date: 3/15/2019 5:31:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/15/2019 12:41:00 AM
This is gorgeous and I especially love the last line :) Congratulations!
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Date: 3/14/2019 8:20:00 PM
such tranquility in your lines Nette, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/11/2019 4:56:00 PM
Wow, inspirational indeed, again, so classic is your poetry..
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Date: 3/11/2019 9:07:00 AM
A lovely slow-dance!
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Date: 3/11/2019 7:32:00 AM
great acrostic sweet nette, love this and so will Dear Heart. Good luck lady! :)-luloo
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Date: 3/10/2019 7:32:00 PM
to walk and breathe in three dimensions, to see the color of each flower from its root, to stand still in wonder...my first thought after reading dear poet...good luck
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Date: 3/10/2019 7:25:00 PM
Wow! Nette, You've expressed a good piece on Patience. It looks like a winner to me.Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/10/2019 5:40:00 PM
Patience shown Beautifuly in your verse Nette. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 3/10/2019 4:17:00 PM
Serene, peaceful, patient!
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Date: 3/10/2019 3:12:00 PM
- Lovely written, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/10/2019 2:58:00 PM
Wow, very nice Nette! :)
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