Paternal Love

What i always wanted in life
Was an ideal dad
One who cared about family happiness 
And could cheer us up when were sad.

I always wanted a kind man, one who’s patient
And to him his family meant the world
I wanted a man to validate me 
By telling me i was a good girl.

I wanted a man who’s discipline 
Was never angry or severe
But a type of discipline 
That would encourage good conduct when we are far or near.

I wanted a man to tell me happy stories
And tuck me into bed
A man who always told me he loved me
And kissed me on the head

I still long to be hugged, kissed, and squeezed
But i don’t’ expect my future mate to blow my nose whenever i sneeze.

My childhood was a mess
And i had a dysfunctional family
It is the mighty hand of god
That has come in and set me free.
It is not fair to ask my future husband
To treat me like a child
But if expects to love him back
He must be meek and mild.

My future mate cannot play that role
Or undo the damage that has been done
But Jesus, my adoptive dad can fill this void
And through him my victory has already been won.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Breidenthal Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 10:42 PM
This was just beautiful. This poem touched my heart. I hope everything's ok with you! :) Take care! You write really gooood~ - DWB P.S. Congrats on the featured poem!
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August 22, 2012 at 7:10 AM
A belated congratulations on your featured poem this week Shuntae. Love, Carol
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February 8, 2010 at 5:37 AM
Indeed an astounding write of faith ... and I pray for you ... for we all know a broken place that is to be mended by God's grace. Good write. Welcome to poetry soup, and pray you will be a friend that inspires me me to such uncommon grace.
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February 7, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all.. as this delight tonight... quite inspirational and no better Daddy than Jesus Christ.. the Lord.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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February 7, 2010 at 6:58 PM
This poem is a poem that talks about what I wish I had in an earthly dad. I had a wonderful grandad, but he suffered illness in his final years of life and he passed when he was 82 and I was 12. I was verbally and physically abused as a child; some of the abuse was at the hands of my biological father. I often fantasize about having a man in my life to shower me with the love and affection that my earthly father denied me. This poem speaks volumes to a lot of adults in shoes, especially women.
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