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Pantoum
A poem with a verse form consisting of three or more stanzas. It has a set pattern within the poem of repetitive lines. The pattern in each stanza is where the second and fourth line of each verse is repeated as the first and third of the next. The pattern changes from the last stanza to the first and third lines are the second and fourth of the stanza above (penultimate). The last line is a repeat of the first line, and the third line of the first is the second line of the last. No rhyme is required.

As Japanese cherry blossoms bloom pink, Spring dabbles in assorted pastel shades. When April rains offer the soil a drink, water trickles as it flows and cascades. Spring dabbles in assorted pastel shades, purple crocus, and yellow daffodils. Water trickles as it flows and cascades, and green grass colors the valleys and hills. Purple crocus and yellow daffodils, pushing through the soil, summoned by the sun. And green grass colors the valleys and hills, for Winter lies defeated; Spring has won. Pushing through the soil, summoned by the sun, wildflower blooms carpet the forest floor. For Winter lies defeated; Spring has won, and Nature rearranges the decor. Wildflower blooms carpet the forest floor when April rains offer the soil a drink. And Nature rearranges the decor as Japanese cherry blossoms bloom pink. (Pantoum) 05/12/2022 A RHYMING PANTOUM OF FIVE STANZAS Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS

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Date: 6/6/2022 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Emile. Love the idea of spring "dabbling!" Such an energetic image. Blessings my friend!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/6/2022 12:24:00 PM
Thanks, Sam, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/6/2022 7:41:00 AM
Back to congratulate you in your winning entry in the contest! Bravo! :)Paulette
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Date: 6/6/2022 7:54:00 AM
Thanks, Paulette I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/5/2022 10:16:00 AM
This poem is so beautiful Emile. It is very deserving of your podium win. Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/5/2022 11:45:00 AM
Thanks, Connie, your visits are always a welcomed treat my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/4/2022 9:32:00 AM
Lovely Pantoum, Emile. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/4/2022 3:42:00 PM
Thanks, Ann, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/4/2022 8:28:00 AM
I knew the quality of your Pantoum, Emile. Let's share equal footing.
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Date: 6/4/2022 3:41:00 PM
Thank you, Jenna, I feel honored to bask in your light my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/4/2022 7:59:00 AM
Emile, I am so pleased that your poem reached podium level. I kept vacillating between the first and second poems I liked most out of all those submitted. Both were equally worthy of a trophy, IMO. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/4/2022 3:40:00 PM
Thanks, Milt, you always succeed at bringing a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/3/2022 3:31:00 PM
This is a fine pantoum, Emile. I’m sure it’s to be crowned a winner.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/3/2022 8:18:00 PM
Thanks, Jenna, you honor me, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/12/2022 8:07:00 PM
Beautifully penned Emile, really enjoyed
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/13/2022 9:05:00 AM
Thanks, Unseeking; I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/12/2022 12:29:00 PM
Beautiful imagery~a springtime delight. Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette
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Date: 5/12/2022 1:32:00 PM
Thanks, Paulette; your comments are always a delight my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/12/2022 11:50:00 AM
Hello Emile, yes it is Spring. Now the wild flowers will grow. People will plant flowers in their garden now. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/14/2022 11:21:00 AM
Hello Emile, you are very welcome. Enjoy your weekend. My friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/12/2022 1:31:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene; I welcome your comments, have a great day my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/12/2022 11:46:00 AM
Lovely as pink cherry blossoms Emile. Love "nature rearranges the decor." Amazing poetic expression my friend. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings of beauty to you!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/12/2022 1:30:00 PM
Thanks, Sam; as always, you bring a smile to my day my friend, Emile.

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