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Passion For Nature

Although my lover’s gone, my passion has been reborn Nature takes my breath away; flowers our gardens adorn Wildflowers of brilliant hues were seeded by the state Now their blossoms add beauty to the interstate Hiking five miles to see a New Hampshire waterfall 'Neath its gentle spray on slippery rocks I did crawl A stronger sense of patriotism seems to grow As an eagle flies o'er amber fields of wheat below Forests beckon too, and if you remain very still A clan of deer might appear, giving you quite a thrill But the ocean will transport my mind to fantasy A seafaress dreams of creatures living in the sea When the walls of my house close in, I just step outside To become one with nature, it’s here I must reside For when enclosed, it’s the beauty of nature I miss The mountains, sea and forests provide a state of bliss
*Entry for Deb Wilson’s “Passion” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/31/2012 6:27:00 PM
We share a similar passion with the outdoors as our living room, Carolyn...I have to agree that we are beckoned by the forests...In my heart I believe it is God calling us to his own unique form of aromatherapy...I always am blessed for the time I spend outdoors...this flows so beautifully...I can picture the deer dancing in front of year --never afraid of their seafaress...
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Gwendolen Song
Date: 3/31/2012 6:28:00 PM
in front of you...
Date: 3/2/2012 4:53:00 AM
Beautiful words and images Carolyn, blessings, Bren : )
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Date: 3/1/2012 1:16:00 PM
Finished my work about the Solid Gray Crocheted Shawl..Did not go exactly like I thought that it would..Sara
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Date: 3/1/2012 12:15:00 PM
Beautiful write, my friend. I, too, love 'the great outdoors'
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Date: 3/1/2012 11:42:00 AM
Your last line sums up the poem wonderfully Carolyn. I've sat many a time thinking of the wonders on this planet I'll miss. It brought a tear on a number of occasions I may add. <*> I hope your illness recedes and allows you to enjoy these beautiful attributes of mother nature for years to come <*> Good luck in Deb's contest :)
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Date: 3/1/2012 10:12:00 AM
Wonderful write on your passion Carolyn.Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 3/1/2012 6:48:00 AM
Just to beautiful to express more feeling than what you already put into this piece Carolyn. The best to you in the contest and always. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/29/2012 8:57:00 PM
What a wonderful write of nature that we all have come to enjoy! I love the line, "A clan of deer might appear, giving you quite a thrill..." it's a very good line! I really enjoyed your poem that you have written recently my friend! This is an awesome write Carolyn! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/29/2012 5:10:00 PM
Beauty is nature my friend, what else could it be, its being is of Love's nature: so is your heart the essence of your body form. Lovely poem dear friend. Health and peace I wish for you to have in this dimension. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/2/2015 1:49:00 PM
best one I've read lately
Date: 2/29/2012 4:56:00 PM
Reads like a winner in Deb's contest..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I don't know exactly which way I will go with it..It has been cloudy off and on here also..Sometimes just morning with the sun coming out in the afternoon..Sara
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Date: 2/29/2012 4:40:00 PM
Beautiful write,Carolyn...nice poem for the contest....
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