Passion

We danced the dance of love, my dear, my heart
and consumed time we shared with raptured hands
the earthly sphere we traveled without fear
and welcomed ecstasy fervor demands
invited pleasure from our eyes of fire
they penetrated our souls, to the core
where we found an inferno of desire
professed a surge of passion we adore
whether day or night secluded spaces
the kiss of love was a hunger we fed
that burned our flesh, leaving scented traces
and melted passionate hearts, until they bled
   Perhaps it's timeless, it was sublime
   This love has gone, a traveler of time

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Date: 11/21/2023 5:00:00 PM
A passionate poem of love, Frederic. Well written as usual, my friend. I wanted to congratulate you on your three poems being published in the latest edition of Poetry Soup's Anthologies! YEAH !!! I also wanted to wish you and your loved ones a Happy Thanksgiving! Have a great Thursday! Bill
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Date: 11/21/2023 3:06:00 PM
A really lovely, passionate sonnet Frederic. So well written and expressed. I especially love the couplet too. Great poetic lines. So enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
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Date: 11/21/2023 1:20:00 PM
Sonnets are something you must have for breakfast as you write so many and do so many well.. I will stick to my weetabix... your poem rhymes and flows so well and i really liked the couplet at the end...
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Date: 11/21/2023 2:12:00 AM
You really are a natural in weaving romance dear Frederick, another beautiful poem that is just so dreamy and captivating with exquisite rhymes and flow of impeccable diction. I love especially “ we found an inferno of desire“ beautiful! “ melted passionate hearts, until they bled” delicate yet intense, not many can do that really. Love this sonnet. Pleasure reading as always
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Date: 11/20/2023 5:46:00 PM
Passionate and engaging.
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