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Parting

You left me standing there, Alone and scared, Tears falling down my cheeks, Making small rivulets on my throat. You said goodbye Unaware of them. The night closing in Like a dark cloud Enveloping you in it, Taking you away from me far away. Your gait was fast Anxious to get away The shadows fell all around me Life seemed so empty No sound, no hope, no light. Come back Come back cries my heart Hold me, walk with me Show me the path. And up there in the sky The moon smiles sadly For he knows He knows that To meet, to know, to love and then to part Is the sad tale of many a human heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/10/2010 4:59:00 PM
Most excellent verse and perfect wrap up in the end lines! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 12/7/2010 9:52:00 PM
kudos on your win, tahera!! love this one! :)
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:01:00 PM
Congrats Tahera my friend on your super win in John's contest with this brilliant write and entry ... enjoy another top spot for a top notch poem with luv..
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Date: 12/6/2010 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's "Jaded Partitions" contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:55:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of jared, tahera
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Date: 11/30/2010 5:04:00 AM
so true... well written!
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Date: 11/29/2010 9:09:00 AM
May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2010 8:52:00 PM
A wonderful emotional write Tahera .. good luck in John's contest on jaded love...my entry is "Pierced by Pain" .. know this one will touch the heart of many who read .. luv.. good luck ..
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Date: 11/28/2010 3:12:00 PM
What a fine summary of the message you want to convey in the last two lines, Tahera
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Date: 11/28/2010 8:49:00 AM
Tahera, I hope you are entering this touching poem in John Heck's new contest "Jaded Love." It's wonderful, my friend, and I think John would really like it. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 11/28/2010 8:15:00 AM
of love's remnants so glowingly potrayed through your liquid, shining pen, tahera... lovely! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/28/2010 6:41:00 AM
Life does throw us a curve when least expected...I enjoye your write, and can relate to it in many past relationships...enjoyed love Michael
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