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Share the hopes within you still,

   And hold the dreams that in you reside.

       Invite a kiss from parted lips,

  And trace the path where hearts abide.

 

And hold the dreams that in you reside

 as you caress your beloved on a hill

And trace the paths where hearts abide,

   your noon tryst was such a delight.

 

 As you caress your beloved on a hill,

love took on a new meaning that day.

  Your noon trust was such a delight.

 while nightmares were kept at bay.

 

Love took on a new meaning that day, 

invite a kiss from parted lips.

While nightmares were kept at bay,

share the hopes within you still.


 

Contest:Choose Your Form 2 Sponsor: Joseph May 05/21/2021

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Date: 5/21/2021 11:14:00 PM
Quite a romantic write, Alexis. Keep them coming. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/21/2021 4:05:00 PM
Wonderful and romantic. The title is very tantalizing.
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Date: 5/21/2021 1:18:00 PM
- I understand that "Love took on a new meaning that day" ... a wonderful poem, Alexis :) - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/21/2021 1:15:00 PM
Very well written and romantic Alexis, Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 5/21/2021 11:34:00 AM
Heartwarming and romantic. Best of wishes for the contest, Alexis. :)
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Date: 5/21/2021 10:44:00 AM
As beautiful as dreams of love--well done, Alexis.
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Date: 5/21/2021 10:28:00 AM
Enjoyed! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/21/2021 9:19:00 AM
Fine write, Alexis.
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