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Part With New Moon Minichu

This lunar ring's dark mood — A colorless chain hung that Vibes in the cornfield croon She's an invisible gait — A new moon's misses blowing In her twilit ways Sowing Forgoing Growing This lunar ring's dark mood — A new moon's misses blowing Growing

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Alesia Leach

Date: 5/23/2025 5:11:00 PM

This poem hums with lunar quiet--elegant and ghostly. "A new moon's misses blowing / In her twilit ways" is breathtaking--like loss written in shadow. The layered repetition works like a chant. Ethereal and haunting.

I Am Anaya

Date: 12/18/2024 8:25:00 PM

The minichu is a favorite form of mine, difficult isn't it. The moon is generous to poets, so many beautiful poems written in it's honor, like yours, Paige. :):)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2024 1:07:00 PM

What a creative Minichu. This form sure suits you, Paige. Hope you have a lovely Thanksgiving.

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/25/2024 4:34:00 PM

A captivating creation that truly mesmerizes, Paige...you shine with this one!

Silent One

Date: 11/25/2024 2:12:00 PM

Great imagery in yout poem Paige

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/20/2024 1:55:00 AM

I had a wonderful time watching a full moon nights ago...a lustrous piece that surely enchants, paige...you flow with this one!

Tom Woody

Date: 11/19/2024 3:51:00 PM

Well I cheated and read all the comments. Invisible moon, invisible people, presence felt. We hope anyway. Interesting poem

Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 11/19/2024 11:00:00 AM

SO, I have to ask after reading this, was this lovely poem brought about by a moonlit walk through the corn at some point? I know I take a few each year (During the growing season also just before harvest) This is so well worded! I have often though of the leaves as a song writer or singer. Especially when the Cicadas are humming strong in July and August. What a wonderful poem to invoke my happy memories. THANK YOU SO MUCH!! A.S.

Paige Hind
Date: 11/19/2024 3:12:00 PM

Hey there, friend! The new moon's invisible vibes are felt by the cornfield. That's what I meant- this is about a new moon and moods invoked by it- and my own mood. Kinda dark... thanks for your feedback. <3 Hugs -

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/18/2024 5:08:00 AM

One can only grow with new enlightenment through moods and times. Nice analogy through. Thank you for your visit to my page.

Mat Ignacio

Date: 11/16/2024 9:07:00 PM

your abilty to find the deeper essence of meaning in so few words is fantastic - beautiful

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/16/2024 10:38:00 AM

Such graceful beauty in the moonlight which is always magical. Well done, Paige. Enjoyed your creativity, as always! Serene blessings of moonlight to you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2024 8:35:00 PM

A lunar treat for the eyes. Is there a Minichu contest happening?

Paige Hind
Date: 11/15/2024 9:07:00 PM

Hey there. Not that I know of- I just love writing Minichus. :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/14/2024 6:05:00 AM

Dear Paige, I loved how you beautifully captured the ethereal dance of emotions tied to the lunar cycle. The imagery of growth and longing invites reflection on life’s quiet transformations. Your words evoke a sense of mystery and connection to nature that lingers long after reading. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/13/2024 6:23:00 AM

A poem that demands a high level of comprehension, particularly due to its various twists throughout. Well articulated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/13/2024 5:13:00 AM

I don’t always understand what you write but can feel the mood. I enjoy the wording nevertheless. Hugs ~ Kim

Paige Hind
Date: 11/15/2024 7:29:00 PM

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2024 7:26:00 PM

Very cool! Thanks for the explanation, Paige!

Paige Hind
Date: 11/15/2024 6:40:00 PM

I wrote lunar ring, in place of a mood ring one wears- "dark mood" and the poem followed suit...or at least, I tried, lol. The images are supposed to make you feel that a new moon is still there. Sometimes I also feel invisible...like a new moon- because of the dark mood in me that I sometimes feel, I guess. Hugs, Kim! Thank you for your feedback.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/13/2024 2:22:00 AM

A poem that requires excellent understanding, especially as it has some twists all along. Well written.