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Part 2 Fully Booked

Part 2, Fully Booked Contest Sponsor: Nette Onclaud time consumes my soul’s desire please Lord, I need him longer eleven minutes til’ death can’t miss his last breath Book Title Used: Eleven Minutes Date Written: June 22, 2016

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/26/2016 10:31:00 AM

i was there with you, lou.. very experiential!.. ohh bid congrats and thanks for being part of my contest.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2016 9:38:00 AM

oh such a sad one. Well done, dear poet, and congratulations.

Karam Misra

Date: 6/25/2016 9:11:00 PM

Oh, those precious 11 minutes! A 7 for this. And a huge congrats on your win, Laura. ~karam~

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/25/2016 2:34:00 PM

Beautiful expression of love in last minute. Congrats on your win my lovely smiling friend. A nice 7. Loved always, bl

John Lawless

Date: 6/23/2016 9:15:00 PM

This is a beautiful piece of jagged glass, tenderly cutting as it breaks