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Those evil thorns of bitterness
That couldn't bear to see
This child so loved and so adored
By their father
Captain Lee

Until one day in early May
When she went out to play
In  fields drenched in morning  dew
Above a wind swept Bay
While standing there
Out on a ledge
Above a sea of green 
With eyes cast down
In deep reflection
Upon that ship of dreams

T'was then 
Her brothers 
Only half
Stepped out beyond the pale
And took the life of Amber 
As her father's ship set sail

The child of Rose
And Captain lee
So cherished and adored
Her lifeless body
Found that morning 
On the Ocean floor 
Forever laid to rest in death
Beneath her mother's breast 
Her named refrained for years in vain
Cried through her father's pain

So many times in life
This Rose 
Had dealt with tragedy 
But this time 
She was dealt
A lifetime 
Sentence
Of grief 
Without reprieve

So...now alone with 
Hope and faith 
Nowhere in her sight
She drifted  in a fog of
Endless days 
And endless nights

A broken soul 
With only yearnings
For her little girl
A broken soul
Drifting
Through a cruel 
And lonely world

A soul so deeply steeped in
Endless grief and
Endless  sorrow
Chained to that tragic day 
With no wish
To see tomorrow

Until one day
When Rose laid down
Upon the brink of death
And watched those green leaves
Turn to amber
Kissed by autumn's breath
A breath that set a blazing fire
Deep within her soul
When that mighty tree
Found the strength
To finally let her children go

And...standing there
Before her now
Rose saw a tree 
With empty boughs
And in that moment realized
Those we love 
Will never die

That tree would bear
The cruel sting
That winter's breath 
Of ice would bring
To once again
Give birth
In spring 

So with faith and hope
Now at her side
She found again the will
To rise
To spread her wings again
And fly

~~~

For two more score
Rose closed the door
On that devil Tragedy
Reborn again
Found inner-peace
In spirituality

Loyal companion
And caregiver to
The ailing
Captain Lee
Who no longer had the 
Will to sail
Upon the endless sea 

He died a sad and broken man
Who finally came to understand
It was his son's 
Who bore the thorns
That left his heart and mind so torn
When they with
Greed and  jealousy 
Killed
The sweetest child
Ever born

But... Justice 
In its own strange way  
Had indeed 
The final say
When the sons of  Captain Lee
Went to the bottom
Of the sea
Downed by a fierce
Raging storm
That finally killed
Those bitter thorns
The day their father
Died

Coin and land 
And hearth and home
The Captain had bequeathed  
For she had stayed there
By his side
Long after she was free
In his final 
Will and testament
His one  good parting deed
Signed with a long repenting quill
And by the legal powers that be
He did in deed
In deep repose
Give it all to Rose

Rose now walked 
The streets of town
With grace and dignity
The richest women in the land
Thanks to Captain Lee

For two more score
With open door
Rose lived in tranquility
Her house dedicated 
To the legacy 
Of Captain Cannon Lee
Providing shelter to the poor
Abandoned women
And their babes
So grateful for the many lives
With the grace of God 
She saved

She died one day in autumn
When amber leaves fell from the tree
And was laid to rest
Beside her daughter
And the Captain Cannon Lee
Dubbed the Rose of Savannah
By those who knew her well
They came by the hundreds
To say their last farewell
Rose petals 
In shades of ebony
Were laid upon her grave
Each one in loving memory
For all the lives she 
Helped  to save

 ~~~

We dwell in quiet places
Where mortals sleep eternally
We earthbound angels made of stone
Keeping vigil for thee

Stone angels carved by human hands
In honor of the dead
Giving meaning to the path
Where mortals dare to tread

Written:  June, 2016
Author:  Elaine C. George of Canada
































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Date: 10/28/2016 10:29:00 AM
This entire poetic story just blew me away. Your words have created a world that I easily slipped into, as if watching all of the comings and goings from that weathered shoreline. The depth of emotion in this broke my heart over and over again until in the end it seems all was good. But truly could it ever be good? I also loved the fact that this was written to a photo and the photo spoke to you that much. Beautifully done Lainey. Definitely epic!!!
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Date: 10/28/2016 3:42:00 PM
Hi Chris. Actually, this poem is now a book with my poetry tied to a collection of photographs of stone angels taken by the Canadian Photographer, Darren Creighton' . To view, go to www.darrencreightonphotography.com Then scroll down to the line that says, Preview the first few pages and click on that line. by for now, Lainey
Date: 10/25/2016 11:42:00 PM
Oh my oh my...what a wonderful story/epic poem! I enjoyed it thoroughly, from beginning to wonderful end. And, needless to say, it was just so full of truth and sorrow but I'm so glad it ended well. Carole
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Date: 12/10/2016 6:01:00 PM
Hi, Carole, Somehow I missed replying to the comments made on the second part of this epic, so I am doing so now. Thank you so much for taking the time to read it. That means a lot to me. Wishing you a wonderful and magical Christmas. Elaine
Date: 10/25/2016 4:18:00 PM
Elaine part one and two are so beautifully written that they moved me deeply. This is indeed an epic poem of great magnificence! I will have to check out the link you gave to see the pictures. This is a fave for sure! Congratulations on having this epic poem in the book and now I see why you have been away for a while. 7 ; )
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Date: 10/28/2016 4:05:00 PM
Thank you dear Connie. Your support of my writing has always been my inspiration. Love, Lainey
Date: 9/29/2016 8:16:00 AM
Made a point in my diary, to come back and read part2, wow not disappointed Elaine, this is amazing,
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Date: 10/1/2016 11:03:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read my epic, Harry. Most appreciated. The book form with the accompaning photography will be on ebook soon. I will keep you posted. Elaine
Date: 9/26/2016 10:32:00 AM
Hi Elaine! Part two is equally beautiful as part one. You kept my attention throughout this long narrative, something very much in your favour, since usually I am not enamoured of very long writes! Full marks to you and your muse:) Warm regards // paul
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Date: 12/10/2016 6:08:00 PM
Hi, Paul, Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read my epic. If you wish to see a preview or purchase this book of poetry and photography, you may do so by going to your search engine and typing in: Earthbound Angels Made of Stone by Darren Creighton and Elaine C. George. Wishing you a wonderful, magical Christmas. By for now, Elaine
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Date: 10/1/2016 11:03:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read my epic, Paul. Most appreciated. The book form with the accompaning photography will be on ebook soon. I will keep you posted. Elaine
Date: 9/19/2016 11:32:00 AM
Loved it , thank you
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Date: 10/1/2016 11:04:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read my epic, Talin. Most appreciated. The book form with the accompaning photography will be on ebook soon. I will keep you posted. Elaine
Date: 7/18/2016 9:11:00 AM
Great story telling and a brilliant write, Elaine. A7. T.J
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Date: 12/10/2016 6:03:00 PM
Hi Teppo, To view this book of poetry and photography, go to your search engine and type in: Earthbound Angels made of stone by Darren Creighton and Elaine C. George. Thank you for your kind comments. Elaine
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Date: 10/1/2016 11:05:00 AM
Hi, Teppo. Just to let you know the book form with the accompaning photography of my epic will be on ebook soon. I will keep you posted. Elaine
Date: 6/30/2016 12:44:00 PM
Good to hear from you, Lainie. Your poem is awesome. I only read it once, but shall read it again when my eyes are better. Love, daver
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Date: 12/10/2016 6:05:00 PM
Hi dear Dave, Thank you for dropping by and reading my epic. The book can be viewed or purchased by going to your search engine and typing in: Earthbound Angels Made of stone by Darren Creighton and Elaine C. George. Wishing you and yours a wonderful, magical Christmas. By for now, my dear friend, Elaine.