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9/17/2024 for The Picture On The Parlor Wall Poetry Contest sponsored by Craig Cornish

Parlor Portrait

When Grandpa died and his clock still ticked,
he fell from a ladder by a tree -
nor could that clock on the wall predict
when I died at age twenty-three.

A traveling artist, who, out of luck, 
implored gramps (...how'd he know his name?) 
My grandpa was kind.  A deal was struck.
Soon his picture was in a frame.  

The parlor portrait's eyes would follow
me, conveying every feeling.
Kindness and cheer, I could swallow,
but remonstration sent me reeling.

A frisbee stuck in a tree, so high,
Grandpa said he'd retrieve it for me.
Just hold the ladder, please, small fry?
and that's all that he asked of me.

Nobody knows that story but me.
I sway gently as the wind does blow,
from a branch on that sycamore tree, 
but the eyes on the portrait know.
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Kauffman Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 11:04 AM
Truly a pensive family secret revealed in your poem, David. Congratulations on your win. Blessings.
Crandall Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 8:21 PM
Thanks, I appreciate it Sam!
Jones Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 5:10 PM
Congratulations on your placement!
Crandall Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 6:23 PM
Thanks Karen!
Fowler Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 1:15 PM
Spooky Dave. Frightening for a child. :)
Fowler Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 6:15 PM
LOL. That would be cool...:)
Crandall Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 2:07 PM
Thanks. I was thinking of one of those TV s hows or movies where the portrait has real eyes.
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 3:42 PM
Very unique way you approached the topic, David. Good luck on the contest
Crandall Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 2:06 PM
Thanks Andrea!
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