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Paris Through the Window

my Paris - my feelings are so divided

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/28/2024 2:19:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your winning work that is in the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/29/2024 1:34:00 PM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my Paris Monoku write again. Always great to see you here. Have a wonderful day....................

thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/27/2024 9:56:00 PM

there are many layers of meaning to your one liner dear poet. so riddle like, so deep. congratulations on your win dear friend. cheers.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/28/2024 10:20:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my Paris Monoku write. I have never been to Paris. It is about a Marc Chagall Painting. I cannot get the picture to load in. The words just came to me. Have a wonderful day....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/27/2024 9:32:00 PM

Your wonderful monoku was a joy to read, Paula. Heartfelt congratulations on your win. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/28/2024 10:18:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my Paris Monoku write to be a joy to read. Have a wonderful day....................

Len Gasun

Date: 8/27/2024 4:24:00 PM

I was right when I thought this is so good/amazing and it will score high. Back to enjoy again and express my warm congratulations my dearest poet friend! Thanks again for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/28/2024 10:16:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my Paris Monoku write to be so good/amazing. Always great to see you back again. Hugs... Have a wonderful day...................

Crystol Woods

Date: 8/27/2024 12:31:00 PM

You get right to the heart of the painting... perhaps even his thoughts as he painted this. Great job and congratulations on your placement!! Xo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/28/2024 10:13:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my Paris Monoku write. These words just came to me. Have a wonderful day....................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/27/2024 9:51:00 AM

"13 Place" Paris Through the Window ~ Date written: 8/23/2024 ~ Marc Chagall Painting

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/27/2024 5:53:00 AM

on either side “my Paris” “my feelings - Back with congrats!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2024 9:51:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my Paris Monoku write again. Always great to see you. Have a wonderful day....................

Karen Jones

Date: 8/27/2024 4:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2024 9:49:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my Paris write again. Great to see you back again. Have a wonderful day.................

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/26/2024 7:03:00 AM

Dear Paula, It is amazing how so much is said in a one liner. Well written! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/26/2024 10:16:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write. Glad you found my Paris write to be Well written! This fun Monoku write is about a Marc Chagall Painting. Sometimes I wish I had gone to see Paris. Oh well.... Have a wonderful day.......................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/25/2024 5:56:00 PM

Love this!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/26/2024 10:11:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write. Glad you love my Monoku Paris write. This write is about a Marc Chagall Painting. I have never been to France. Thought one day I would get there but not now. Have a wonderful day......................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/24/2024 8:27:00 PM

You know, I felt the same way about Berlin from 1961-1989 ---- completely divided!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/26/2024 10:09:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my Monoku Paris write. I have never been to France or to Germany. This write is about a Marc Chagall Painting. It would be better if I could get the picture to load in. Have a wonderful day......................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/24/2024 5:06:00 PM

I know that at times feelings can be all over the map , even Paris,! love

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/26/2024 10:07:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my Monoku Paris write. I have never been to France. This write is about a Marc Chagall Painting. I cannot get the picture to load in. Have a wonderful day......................

Ink Empress

Date: 8/24/2024 2:27:00 PM

So deep and very well written in few syllables! This could be used by many , as their opinion on paris! How clever and catchy phrase it is! Ive been to france but not paris and never really thought of going too, but ofcourse many love the city: pleasure reading your monoku! Well done: best wishes always

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/26/2024 10:06:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write and for your Best wishes. Glad you found my Paris Monoku write to be So deep and very well written in few syllables! I have never been to France. This is about a Marc Chagall Painting. Have a wonderful day....................

Jan Allison

Date: 8/24/2024 12:43:00 PM

Got to say I am not a fan of france or the french lol but your poem is short but so sweet:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/26/2024 10:01:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my Paris Monoku write. I have never been to France. This write is about a Marc Chagall Painting. I cannot get the picture to load in. Hugs... Have a wonderful day......................

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 8/24/2024 12:34:00 PM

Why Paula?...I mean Paris and feelings divided?...Paris is always there. Beautiful monoku my dear friend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2024 1:23:00 PM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my Paris write. I have never been to Paris. It is about a Marc Chagall Painting. I cannot get the picture to load in. Have a wonderful day/weekend.......................

Len Gasun

Date: 8/24/2024 9:32:00 AM

This is a brilliant monoku my dearest poet friend Paula. Love for the place and for someone special. I love this a lot, so creative. I did try this contest too, choosing another paint, I'm not sure if it has worth. I just tried. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes always. God bless you and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/24/2024 11:06:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write and for your Best wishes. Glad you found my Paris write to be a brilliant monoku. That makes me happy. I have never been to Paris, wish I had gone. Guess I would have seen Marc Chagall Paintings. Hugs... Have a wonderful day/weekend.......................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/24/2024 2:19:00 AM

Good one, Paula. It reads like a great contender to me. Way to go. I looked at some of his paintings but nothing much struck me to write. I need to look once again to see if I can find a poem in one of them. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/24/2024 11:02:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write. Glad you found my Paris write to be a Good one. After looking up Marc Chagall Paintings. I fell in love with this one, then the words just came to me. Keep looking, I bet you will find one that talks to you like I did. Have a wonderful day/weekend.......................

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/24/2024 1:51:00 AM

I visited Paris twice. Great if expensive city.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/24/2024 10:55:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my Paris write. I have never been to Paris, wish I had gone. Guess I would have seen Marc Chagall Paintings. I fell in love with this one. Have a wonderful day/weekend.......................

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/23/2024 9:07:00 PM

Nice poem. I see it on tv.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/24/2024 10:53:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write. Glad you found my Paris write to be a Nice poem. After looking up Marc Chagall Paintings. The words just came to me. Have a wonderful day/weekend.......................

Silent One

Date: 8/23/2024 11:51:00 AM

lovely one liner.. You dont need an image here, as you create your own imagery..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/24/2024 10:52:00 AM

Thank You, for taking the time to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my Paris write. After looking up Marc Chagall Paintings. I fell in love with this one. The words just came. Have a wonderful day/weekend.......................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/23/2024 10:52:00 AM

Paris Through the Window ~ Date written: 8/23/2024 ~ Marc Chagall Painting