Paradise,You and I

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11/27/2023 I, in winsome joy, wonder, what our future delightfully holds. Look past these daisies,now and search not in their smiles. Come sit beside me, tell me the dreams you behold. Look into the sunset, sweet lips, where life goes on for miles! The wonder of you, green eyes, to those, my heart was sold. Walking barefoot, on sweet grass, on warm, exotic, sun-kissed, isles.

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Christina Bowring

Date: 11/30/2023 1:53:00 PM

Dear Pangie, what a gloriously romantic poem! Just what I love! Such poetic, exquisite lines my lovely,’ look past these daisies, now and search’’ on warm, exotic sun- kissed isles’. What gorgeous imagery. You captured such a beautiful scene and the picture accompanies it so well too. Really enjoyed this on a dark, cold night. Thank you! Hugs and smiles to you my poetic , sweet friend xx :):)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/30/2023 3:43:00 PM

Christina! You have blown me away with your generosity of a comment. Golly! Green eyes, love, passion, being lost in the glory of another soul…..what could be better? Being in sync with another soul is the most beautiful place, one can be. It’s wonderfully spiritual~ an island of love ! Pangie xxxx

Regina Elliott

Date: 11/30/2023 11:33:00 AM

Hi Pangie, Did you travel a lot when you were younger? You write of exotic places so beautifully. All the best to you ~ xxxx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/30/2023 3:21:00 PM

Hey Regina. I wish that were true! I have a very exotic mind.And I have had a life chock full of both highs and lows. In my mind, I am traveling. I did not live a conventional life at all. I am known for telling it like it is. I am not a follower or one desiring to have group approval. Just a Jew friends who do not pull disappearing acts? Know what I mean? Words are cheap. Those who really love us are few. As for poetry. I do not write to please. I pen my heart. Pangie xxx x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2023 2:53:00 PM

Lovely images in this sweet poem, Pangie

Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/28/2023 3:33:00 PM

Greetings! I hope you had a great Thanksgiving!! . Christmas is not far away for us all and Chanuka!! Like the lights of the season, you brighten my heart.. Thank you. Pangie xxxx

Susan Lawrence

Date: 11/27/2023 6:28:00 PM

I travel with you dear Pangie to the exotic and beckoning recesses in your mind. A place where green eyes and sun-kissed isles can be fully realized through an open heart and a pallet of colors so rich and full of life . You have a beautiful heart and soul dear one .Traveling with you is a gift for sure . Hugs always, Susan :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/27/2023 6:37:00 PM

Dear Susan, you are magic with words! I think I’ll erase my poem, and just put your words, in its place.. I am glad we travel in similar spheres))). Having a deep passion for life and its meaning is no small gift. You do have that.)) would I were younger I would be able to do a lot more than I am. But we have to appreciate ourselves or what we are, whether we write long poems or short poems, haiku or long descriptive poems. We are not all the same.. and respect each another I find is magical.. But I will admit, I bow to no poet. Yes I am already for some nice warm place some green eyes ant loving. Paradise mixed with passion makes a wonderful wonderful life. Thank you my friend.. .Pangie xxxx

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/27/2023 4:34:00 PM

Quite lovely dear Pangie. I love your "...look past these daisies now, and search not in their smiles..." You certainly have a special way with romantic poems! I love it! :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/27/2023 5:26:00 PM

You are the dearest sweet friend and I enjoy our moments together. Real people are the best. Real people make the best friends. Thank you for being my friend. :) Thank you for being in my life :) <3

Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/27/2023 4:45:00 PM

Hi dear Linda.! You have been a plus in my life since I first met you! Glad you specked which line. I have to be in each line, meaning ..I need to Experience the feeling. You know that I am not intellectual.. I ran away from that a long time ago. It was an empty space.to live in. You know me well enough that I like real people. Cannot stand Fatheads. a little humility goes a Very Long Way, Linda. Thank you for being in my life.****** Pangie xxxx