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Paradise of timeless peace and harmony "Divine"! Amber clouds glow among the rising heaven River of the prettiest crystal blue wandering water Align fanning palms trees resting in the sandy shore Dreams echo through the breeze of lover’s passion entwine It was surly his heart trembling for the want of her Soul searching eyes in his sleep as he Eases on her breast of melodies 12/20/2015 Paradise-Acrostic - Poetry Contest Sponsored by:John Hamilton http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e4/Eve_Roper/amber_zpsbdieciqz.jpg

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Skat A

Date: 12/28/2015 10:20:00 PM

Eve, a very nice win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2015 4:24:00 AM

Eve, Congratulations on your win. LINDA

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/28/2015 3:35:00 AM

Romance in your own paradise!

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/27/2015 7:51:00 PM

Beautiful and romantic, Eve. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/27/2015 6:36:00 PM

ROMANCE IN PARADISE, the path my sojourn took to express my love for me wife. For what would paradise truly be without our great love there alongside us? A7 Congrats on your win!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2015 3:20:00 PM

a nice romantic one, Eve. Congrats for your win.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2015 2:31:00 PM

Such a lovely poem that boasts of captivating imagery which leads to a delightful romantic ending. ~ Congratulations on this worthy win, Eve! ~ Regards & Hugs *~* paul

Lu Loo

Date: 12/27/2015 11:22:00 AM

Eve, congrats on your placement in the Paradise contest! *smiles* *hugs*

Michael Tor

Date: 12/27/2015 11:15:00 AM

Beautiful Eve. Excellent write.

John Hamilton

Date: 12/27/2015 12:30:00 AM

Very nice Eve, really enjoyed it! Would have scored higher with rhyme! Maybe next time. Congrats on your placement.

Eric Boddie

Date: 12/21/2015 10:42:00 PM

I just have to tell you what I think of this....mother and son sharing too much power to resist....the sheer Power Of Love leaves us forever connected....that's just how I saw it, I hope it was expected....very Beautiful eve....;)

Eve Roper
Date: 12/21/2015 11:06:00 PM

I'm not much of a romantic in writing , but I'm learning. Thank you for your awesome help!

Eric Boddie
Date: 12/21/2015 10:59:00 PM

and just to be straight, it is the last 2 lines that inspired this....;)

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/21/2015 7:31:00 AM

Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl

Eve Roper
Date: 12/21/2015 9:43:00 AM

Thank you, B.L., for always being there supporting me in my work, hugs dear friend