Paradise

Passing through an easel of brushed hues Amber fields burst to heed summer’s call, Rising with the night, fragrant like mist As a radiant display etches a canvas Dressed by vibrant plumes, by reddest shades Igniting a glorious bliss within my heart… Slowly, I breathe in heaven's rhapsody Enjoying a field’s grandeur before it drifts away. 12/27/2015 Paradise- Acrostic Contest

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Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/9/2016 11:38:00 AM

Beautiful write Nette, congratulations on your winning write. I enjoyed the read ~ Caryl

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/31/2015 8:55:00 AM

Very pretty and lifting ... CayCay

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/29/2015 8:12:00 AM

Excellent beauty painted with your nice soft brush. Congrats on your win. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Skat A

Date: 12/28/2015 10:19:00 PM

Nette, a very nice win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2015 4:21:00 AM

Nette, Congratulations on your win. LINDA

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/28/2015 3:19:00 AM

A beauteous igniting canvas !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/28/2015 2:05:00 AM

Great take on theme and a wonderful acrostic nette.. congrats on big win!

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/27/2015 7:45:00 PM

Lovely imagery in your paradise Acrostic, Nette. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/27/2015 6:21:00 PM

Nette, this is a colorful and inspiring paradise that would delight any seeking soul!!A7 Congrats on your win!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2015 3:15:00 PM

Congratulations, Nette. I bet if it had been rhymed, it would be at the top of the list!!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/27/2015 1:24:00 PM

So well crafted... gorgeous imagery and beautiful phrasing. BRAVO nette! Best wishes, Keith

Michael Tor

Date: 12/27/2015 10:57:00 AM

nette congratulations on your win!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/27/2015 5:43:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your very poetic description of paradise..Reads like a winner if for a contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2015 3:31:00 AM

Simply beautiful, Nette! You not only create a most beautiful painting, but also manage to spread that glorious bliss from your heart to mine. Congratulations on a truly deserved win. Honoured to be standing next to you:) Hugs // paul

John Hamilton

Date: 12/27/2015 12:14:00 AM

Very nice Nette, really excellent, would have placed higher with rhyme, but I know it's not always possible. Outstanding free verse acrostic.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2015 7:29:00 PM

Gorgeous one, Nette. I love how yours is pure imagery.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/26/2015 7:20:00 PM

Dear Nette, I have to agree with the silent one on this poem is just a masterpiece of a painting, what a beautiful canvas of colors words of depth you've created hear my friend! Simply awesome, just wonderful a picture perfect post card dear girl enjoyed every word of it, and thanks for your review of my site also, take care of yourself, and a happy belated Christmas to you also, hope you had a beautiful Christmas, cheri