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Paradise

I longed for it like other men; I sought some sages, now and then. They did somehow enlighten me, But still I did not find the key. I tried to search in all the books-- In mountains, dales, and murmuring brooks: They all had joy to advertise But nowhere near to Paradise. My search brought me to different sites From lowest lows to highest heights; I tasted all the world’s delight Still Paradise was not in sight. So I came back all weatherworn Frustrated, weary, and forlorn I planned to spend my last of days Just lounging on my favorite chaise. Then I saw you and realized How blind I was--and so surprised!-- Because you had always been there The Eden that I searched somewhere. Now I am wiser, this I know: I needn’t somewhere else to go For Paradise is just so near-- Right here, right now, with you, my Dear. March 27, 2023 Among 1st Place Writing Challenge - ‘P’ Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 4/3/2023 4:20:00 AM
Ryan, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 3/30/2023 9:51:00 AM
- Lovely written about paradise, Ryan :) - Congratulations on your win :) -
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Date: 3/29/2023 9:46:00 PM
"Paradise is just so near-- Right here, right now, with you, my Dear" - Great truth is illustrated very beautifully. Congratulations!
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Ryan Gayagay
Date: 3/30/2023 6:09:00 AM
Many thanks, Christuraj!
Date: 3/29/2023 4:56:00 AM
You will be a gracious presence here. Love your poetry !
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Ryan Gayagay
Date: 3/29/2023 6:36:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa! I do love your poems, too.
Date: 3/29/2023 1:06:00 AM
Aha! Paradise of love, wonderful, Ryan:)
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Ryan Gayagay
Date: 3/29/2023 6:35:00 AM
Many thanks, Joanna. Love and happiness!
Date: 3/27/2023 9:10:00 PM
This is beautifully written. And of course it’s paradise view. All the best in the contest, Ryan. ~ Fin
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Ryan Gayagay
Date: 3/27/2023 9:23:00 PM
Thank you, Fin. You're so kind.

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