Paradise

I longed for it like other men;
I sought some sages, now and then.
They did somehow enlighten me, 
But still I did not find the key. 

I tried to search in all the books--
In mountains, dales, and murmuring brooks:
They all had joy to advertise
But nowhere near to Paradise.

My search brought me to different sites
From lowest lows to highest heights;
I tasted all the world’s delight
Still Paradise was not in sight.

So I came back all weatherworn
Frustrated, weary, and forlorn
I planned to spend my last of days
Just lounging on my favorite chaise.

Then I saw you and realized
How blind I was--and so surprised!--
Because you had always been there
The Eden that I searched somewhere.

Now I am wiser, this I know:
I needn’t somewhere else to go
For Paradise is just so near--
Right here, right now, with you, my Dear.

March 27, 2023

Among 1st Place
Writing Challenge - ‘P’ Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 4:20 AM
Ryan, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 9:51 AM
- Lovely written about paradise, Ryan :) - Congratulations on your win :) -
Alex Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 9:46 PM
"Paradise is just so near-- Right here, right now, with you, my Dear" - Great truth is illustrated very beautifully. Congratulations!
Gayagay Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 6:09 AM
Many thanks, Christuraj!
George Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 4:56 AM
You will be a gracious presence here. Love your poetry !
Gayagay Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 6:36 AM
Thank you, Valsa! I do love your poems, too.
Daniel Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 1:06 AM
Aha! Paradise of love, wonderful, Ryan:)
Gayagay Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 6:35 AM
Many thanks, Joanna. Love and happiness!
Chuuk Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 9:10 PM
This is beautifully written. And of course it’s paradise view. All the best in the contest, Ryan. ~ Fin
Gayagay Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 9:23 PM
Thank you, Fin. You're so kind.
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