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For Brian Strand's Your Choice X Poetry Contest 10 June 2025 ^ d/ l \ d e / l \ r d / l \ e l / l \ a o / l \ m f / ^ \ s take flight, / / l \ \ / / l \ \ e, / / l \ \ z \ _ / l \ _ / e \ / \ /_______ l _____\ / \ / e gliding on a gentle b r childhood's simple joy. 1st Place

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Date: 6/13/2025 12:48:00 AM
Your Hiku’s are becoming better & better Bernard. Soon the techno’s need to expand the keyboards for this form. Light from da South. X
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/13/2025 3:11:00 AM
Thanks, Sir Ghairo. It's fun to join this kind of poetry contest. To win is a bonus.
Date: 6/12/2025 1:38:00 PM
Worthy so worthy! Congrats!
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/12/2025 7:12:00 PM
Thank you, Ma'am Kim. Your kind words are priceless.
Date: 6/12/2025 11:14:00 AM
Very creative and unique Bernard. Great shape! Congrats on your top spot! :)
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/12/2025 7:13:00 PM
Thanks, Ma'am Linda. Your comment is well appreciated.
Date: 6/12/2025 9:06:00 AM
So cute and creative! Congratulations bro. Bernard! Stay creative ^___^ JCB
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/12/2025 7:11:00 PM
Thanks, Sister JCB. Contest sponsors are very generous and considerate.
Date: 6/10/2025 10:06:00 PM
Awesome visual poem!
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/11/2025 4:11:00 AM
Much thanks, Ma'am Karen. Winning in the contest is truly a good achievement.
Date: 6/10/2025 5:22:00 PM
Nicely done!
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/10/2025 6:50:00 PM
Thank you, Ma'am Kim. Sir Brian's Contest showed quick result. Very impressive indeed.
Date: 6/10/2025 5:50:00 AM
Very Cool, Bernard!
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/10/2025 6:51:00 PM
Thanks, Ma'am Rea. I hope you will also bag again the trophy.

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