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Paper Dolls

I write upon my twisted trails of fairytales Whereby some arcane beauty is defined As meek blonde girls sweeping the coals No chance to dance at balls Hoping only for pity from some magic elf Or a royal's fetish for tiny feet But now she's shattering those mirrors of deceit crossing out lies left too long on the shelf She needs no prince to break her walls No damsel wrote this scroll while the black haired adventurer partakes of wine riding on backs of disappearing whales whose red shadows splash over purple pirate sails by colors erupting outside gray lines as she cuts holes in paper souls of heartless paper dolls Once she rescues herself from this passive pale self she will quiver the air with her drumbeats 2/1/21 'I Write Upon' contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 3/20/2022 4:42:00 PM
I love this, Michelle, especially your last line. So full of promise.
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Date: 2/15/2021 10:08:00 AM
Hi Michelle , I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/23/2021 8:11:00 PM
Appreciate it, thanks, Alexis!
Date: 2/15/2021 9:18:00 AM
Michelle, congratulations on your win in my contest, I Write Upon, using my Invented Form, your poem is wonderful _Constance
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/23/2021 8:11:00 PM
Thank you for placing me in your contest, Constance~
Date: 2/5/2021 6:56:00 PM
Brilliant imagery, Michelle. An eerie tale of despair followed by a positive mind, is how i interpret this., Gem.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/9/2021 8:02:00 PM
Thank you for your introspective take on this, always glad to hear from you~
Date: 2/2/2021 11:52:00 AM
Even with tiny feet, your niece should beware glass slippers! Aloha! Rico
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/9/2021 8:02:00 PM
They sound very uncomfortable to wear, actually!
Date: 2/2/2021 11:47:00 AM
Hi Michelle, What a great take on the contest theme. The character in your write is fierce and a force to reckoned with. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/9/2021 8:01:00 PM
It is all about breaking the glass (slipper) ceiling, like Gershon said below, thanks for commenting!
Date: 2/2/2021 11:28:00 AM
what a wonderful take on the theme Michelle, I found the imagery quite spooky to be honest like the inner being of a tormented soul:-( I never played with dolls as a child and the temptation to cut paper dolls to shreds has quite lure to it lol !!:-) hugs jan xx
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/9/2021 8:00:00 PM
I've never deliberately cut up paper dolls, but the idea is morbidly fascinating :)
Date: 2/2/2021 10:34:00 AM
Cinderella takes a leading roll in this gem of a poem I might be completely wrong - are the last two verses about Cinderella or about a different character? 'Cuts holes in paper souls of heartless paper dolls' I enjoyed this poem my friend and think you are a genius! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/9/2021 7:59:00 PM
Thank you my friend, this is about how girls are breaking stereotypes to be their own hero, instead of waiting for someone else to save them~
Date: 2/2/2021 3:20:00 AM
I love this!!! You did a awesome job here. I love it! God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 2/1/2021 3:32:00 PM
'She' sounds like a cross between Gal Gadot, Wonder Woman, and Harriet Tubman. Maybe an 'intersection' instead of a cross. ! I like how you've smashed 'poor Cinderella' to smitherines. Or should I say into pumpkin pieces. You have now broken the 'glass slipper ceiling, Michelle! Ingenious. :) gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/1/2021 5:01:00 PM
I was inspired by my little niece and how she is breaking the stereotypes when she plays, without even realizing it! Thanks for your generous feedback, gw~

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