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Panta Rei,Ouden Menei

We are but fleeting shadows
Upon the face of this earth
So solid,so tangible ,yet so ready
To slip through the hands of life
When we doff our mortal coil
To leave an inert  and empty shell
Doomed from birth  to turn to dust
How much store do we place
In the substance of this earth
Which can erupt and flow in waves
Sweeping all before it unstoppably
Then coming to rest
Once more monumentally still
Cloaked in the garb of geological grittiness
Water itself takes many forms 
As gas,liquid and solid 
Steam, water and ice
Such metamorphoses tease our understanding
The restlessness of our universe
Encompassing a world of whirling atoms
to give an illusion of stability 
While spatially distanced.
This mysterious blend of dark matter 
And seemingly  solid shapes
Defies resolution by the human mind
As a few  search for meaning 
Seen by many as a purposeless pursuit.
Plus ca change,
Plus c'est la meme chose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 3/27/2024 9:52:00 AM
The fleeting illusion of time and life, so well put. Great poem!
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Date: 11/2/2020 11:42:00 AM
"Changes in attitudes, changes in attitudes, nothing remains quite the same." JB observation. ;) Nicely written Denis! Plus ca change, Plus c'est la meme chose. a fav for me. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Denis Bruce
Date: 11/3/2020 1:32:00 AM
Thank you ,Linda, for taking the time to comment on my poem.
Date: 11/1/2020 2:32:00 PM
Enjoyed your thought provoking lines Denis, congrats on a nice win in Chantelle's contest!
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Denis Bruce
Date: 11/2/2020 1:02:00 AM
Thank you, John. Glad you enjoyed it
Date: 11/1/2020 11:15:00 AM
Denis, for me, your deep and rich inward reflection conveys a grand expression of how insignificant our physical existence is - in the grand scheme of things - no matter how significant we think we might be, though most might not bother to think about it at all, which is a shame.. Your closing lines are grand finale to a meaningful introspection. Congratulations for your excellent win in Chantelle's contest.. ~Susan
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Denis Bruce
Date: 11/1/2020 11:35:00 AM
Susan,It is so kind of you to comment so positively upon my poem,for which I did not hold out much hope when I wrote it. It is encouraging to read such insightful lines.

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