Pang

Pang….no  more!!

Pang….suddenly, shocks me!
This unfathomable message
I  didn't  expect would touch me
An  emotional distress..a change
Devastatingly censures  me
With horrifying like ‘an abominable substance
In my heart and soul, naked truth  it  insinuates
Have to act, counteract and dislike
   the note like committing suicide!

Pang….this plea must please
Might dealt me to my knees
Despairing me though to the bone
I know  i’m not remiss but acknowledge
Succombs me seriously extend some
Allayed fears and nuisances
That i must know without expect a mundane 
Seemed doom this waterloo of
      napoleon bonaparte’s.

Pang….would pity humbled  me
I  resolve to finally try absolve
Up to this dying moment i perceive hope
Nonetheless,  more time to intercede
This hay must not go into waste
As my creator on my seemingly side
Eventually, compose myself counting on me
For the last time. Await’s a chance
            to  an oozing love!
            
Pang….these horrors i didn't know where
    it came 
Thus, it beacons me and drowns me
Nauseating   my whole being now  fragile
My military acumen  enough yet fight the nemesis
Much  ready to stand parry with confidence
Though my dwindling and disarrayed star
     still would sense
And the battle has  just begun only to win
    the war sometime
At the right time. No more pangs to bear but a
    sweet revenge.


By: william s. Labtis
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 5, 2015 at 4:02 PM
WILLIAM, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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