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Pandemic Bees

Summer walks wield charm and power. Dandelion love’s free and wild. A pick-me-up basic flower - I find happiness in the child. Pandemic bees - grand moment’s seize. In 2020, I smiled as his skateboard trails bird, that same hour. Boy’s twinkling eyes enthralled, beguiled. Innocence, a scene to devour. Grand child’s dismay - “Aww, he flied ‘way” 6/9/2022 POSIE Contest Sponsor: Emile Pinet Used HMS Posie form: ABABCC ABABDD, with a syllable pattern of 888844 888844

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Date: 6/13/2022 1:41:00 AM
Interesting poem, Kim, the subject matter different. An enjoyable read.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2022 9:49:00 AM
Thank you, Harry!
Date: 6/11/2022 9:22:00 PM
Kids with skateboards, so talented, a skill. They bring us so much joy! Good luck in the contest Kim! Anaya
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2022 7:46:00 AM
Thank you, Anaya! <3
Date: 6/11/2022 9:23:00 AM
A very creative writing that deserves recognition, dearest Kim. Be blessed.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2022 7:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! ~ hugs, Kim
Date: 6/11/2022 8:54:00 AM
This is lovely. Awe, youth flied away from me, before we were ever acquainted. May be, those who never had, appreciate and understand this fine poem best. Wonderful, talented writing. Heads and shoulders above mediocrity.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2022 7:55:00 PM
Thank you, Joe! I really appreciate it!
Date: 6/10/2022 4:03:00 AM
A magical write dear friend, so well penned, so rich in imagery and so creative, loads of luck in the contest Kim. love hugs Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2022 5:09:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jennifer <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2022 5:03:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jennifer <3
Date: 6/10/2022 1:23:00 AM
How lovely summer memories ar. We must not forget them. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2022 5:04:00 AM
So true, Victor! ~ hugs
Date: 6/9/2022 8:42:00 PM
'He flied 'way.' Ha, ha! Perfect dialoguing, Kim. (I maked a picture of that). :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2022 5:04:00 AM
Kids are cute that way. This is my youngest grandchild.
Date: 6/9/2022 3:03:00 PM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it. God is so good to let us see children and grandchildren. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2022 4:12:00 PM
Amen! Thank you, Sara!
Date: 6/9/2022 10:52:00 AM
You paint a lovely summer scene Kim. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2022 2:14:00 PM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 6/9/2022 10:26:00 AM
So sweeet)) God’s blessings “bee”with you! Panagiota ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2022 2:14:00 PM
You “bee” blessed too! Thank you ~ Kim
Date: 6/9/2022 9:51:00 AM
lovely, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2022 2:15:00 PM
Thank you, Jeff!

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