Pampas Grass

Pampas grass bloom shoots Tall erect, buzzing, buzzing Bees enjoy breakfast

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James Fraser

Date: 8/27/2009 5:47:00 AM

Lovely poem Sara>>James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/27/2009 12:15:00 AM

Hi Sara, I have a particular liking for this poem. REASON: I had some pampas grass growing in my yard at the home where I raised my girls. I didn't realize that the bees liked it. There were lots of bees in the yard, but mostly around the sago palm, rosemary and other aromatic plants nearby. I wasn't going to plant any pampas grass at my present homeplace, but after reading this, I just might. We need more bees and so far the Sago's haven't made it here. Thanks for this write. DAS-J

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/26/2009 6:19:00 AM

Nicely done haiku...love the opening line.