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palm trees in the mist

palm trees in the mist waves bring shell treasures to shore -- gulls scavenge for food

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2011 5:38:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your placement Carolyn, in the contest "An Haiku From Your Window" sponsored by Michael J. Falotico. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 8:53:00 PM
am in love with the second line.
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:49:00 PM
This created an awesome image for me! Great job! Thank you for your kind words on mine. Sincerely, Lisa
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Date: 2/16/2011 2:39:00 PM
thank you for your comment and yes its good to be posting again. this was a great Haiku, and makes me wish i was In Jacksonville, but no i am not going there only wished it in my poem. but your poem makes me want to be where it is warm and no snow.
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Date: 2/15/2011 2:04:00 PM
No better scene than looking out to sea with land on either side. Land, sea and fishing, just marvellous. Have a lovely evening Carolyn....:)x
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Date: 2/13/2011 2:22:00 PM
Excellence at the top Carolyn, good to see. Congratulations. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/11/2011 12:45:00 PM
great life at the beach!
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Date: 2/10/2011 2:16:00 PM
I was with you Carolyn, at the window, a wonderful view it was to and later we went collecting those shell treasures, just me and you~~
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Date: 2/10/2011 11:20:00 AM
Hi, Carolyn, I really like the images you have in this haiku. With the rain and the cold we are having here, I wish I was on an island of palm trees. Take care and may good come your way, Jancarl
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Date: 2/10/2011 10:50:00 AM
Hello Carolyn, Congratulations on your wonderful Haiku win! This is perfect! Lov, Shar
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Date: 2/9/2011 10:05:00 PM
Congratulations Carolyn. Pretty rare view this time of year. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/9/2011 2:51:00 PM
Wonderful Caroline, lovely haiku images.
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Date: 2/9/2011 4:04:00 AM
Beautiful! Carolyn. Many Congrats on our 2nd place win. Lainie
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Date: 2/8/2011 8:02:00 PM
Such a beautiful pic full of life. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 2/8/2011 2:48:00 PM
I loved this the first time I saw it! Congratulations, CArolyn.!
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Date: 2/8/2011 2:19:00 PM
Congats Carolyn on your 2nd place win my contest, sorry your weather was rough yesterday.. Hang in there love...luv to from me ..Michael
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Date: 2/8/2011 1:39:00 PM
So nice no snow.This was terrific and enjoyable.Thanks for your congrats on my win and back to you.Soupmail.~Teresa~
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Date: 2/8/2011 12:55:00 PM
OOOOOh!!How I envy your view. With your descriptive Haiku I can almost picture myself there. Thank you for the imaginary vacation!
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Date: 2/8/2011 10:19:00 AM
LOvely, peaceful scene - would love to be there. Love, Dave
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Date: 2/8/2011 9:14:00 AM
Excellent haiku. CONGRATULATIONS on your BIG WIN in Michael's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/8/2011 8:25:00 AM
wonderful haiku, Carolyn!!! I knew it would be a winner!! Congratulations! :) I can see those gulls diving !
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Date: 2/8/2011 7:57:00 AM
while in college in Alabama one of my friends from Florida commented " they don't have any palm trees up here. " and i thought of it ever sence. you must live in a wonderful place if you can see that from your window. john
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Date: 2/8/2011 7:16:00 AM
lucky YOU! LOL excellent form!& cut! Light & Love
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Date: 2/8/2011 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/8/2011 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Carolyn
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